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Date: Sep 10, 2009 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 4B: Calm Before the Storm (continued)

I loved the chapter, errors and all. If you need a beta reader in the interim, I'd be happy to help.

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Date: Jun 19, 2009 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1a: Opportunity Knocks

As always, a beautiful story

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Date: Jun 19, 2009 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 3B: Pony Girls (continued)

It would be nice to get into the mind of Charles a bit. I'm anxious to see how it all ties together.

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Date: Jun 19, 2009 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 3A: Pony Girls

very well done. I like the depth of the dialog, and your description is flawless

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Date: Apr 12, 2009 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: Return to the Fold

great chapter. I'm anxious to read about the pony play. Now your previous questions make sense.

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Date: Mar 30, 2009 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1b: Opportunity Knocks (continued)

Another great chapter. I have to say, I'm delighted that the submissive women aren't bursting into tears at the drop of a hat.

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