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Reviewer: Aella Whirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2012 - 05:27 am Title: Epilogue

Very interesting story. I enjoyed the journey along with Amber.

I'll be patiently waiting for the next installment!!

Reviewer: Redrosewitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2012 - 05:15 pm Title: Epilogue

What a story !! And I'm so glad there's another instalment.

I love the fact that Amber has seen back to the past, and now knows that her magical abilities are something she's had for some time.
I'm glad she was able to help her friend to escape the cruel slavery that awaited her.
At least Amber now knows that being a slave on Destran is the right life for her.

I'll be looking out for Amber's Victory.

Reviewer: Redrosewitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2012 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Death of a Slave

After all she's been through and the progress she's made, I so hope Amber will be alright.

Reviewer: Redrosewitch Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2012 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter 3: Impossible Things

Amber and Vesti are getting on famously aren't they ? Seeming too well for the liking of some other wizards. And I'm not sure they'd be happy to know what a natural with magic Amber is.

I'm intrigued about this being Melan did business with.

Reviewer: Redrosewitch Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2012 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Advanced Training

Oh wow where can I start. There are so many things I loved in this chapter.
( And I certainly didn't know all those things about mating cats before )

The collar's are a brilliant idea. There are all kinds of things a slave could do while wearing one, that would normally be very dangerous.

I wonder if cunt manipulation is really possible. The self lubricating butt plug
sounds very useful.

These wizards sound like a lot of trouble.

Reviewer: Redrosewitch Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2012 - 05:55 pm Title: Prologue

Great start.Inter clan politics, the cut throat world of trade and it looks like there's magic in the air.

I love it when a writer creates their own world for a story. The sky really is the limit.
Anything could happen.

Reviewer: Wallaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 15, 2010 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 4: Interludes

Very good and interesting story.  I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: admin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2010 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 4: Interludes

Beautiful as always.

Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2009 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: Advanced Training

Awesome to see more of this story!!! Can't wait to read more.

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