Date: Jul 22, 2010 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is great! The formatting is a little messed up. Try pasting it from Word into a notpad file to strip out the formatting then into the site.
thanks for the great review and the note about formatting , i wrestled with it a while and will try notepad for my next installment .
thanks for reading and glad you liked it , i will be posting more :)