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Reviewer: bluealieness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2009 - 10:28 pm Title: Reunited

well done! very good insight of agnes. totally laughed when you had "Suddenly, splittingly, slippily." It reminds me of the alliterations from primary school, although maybe not as naughty. lol. keep up the excellent work. :D

Reviewer: maddie50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2009 - 01:53 am Title: Chelsea Smiles

Caught between the devil and the deep blue sea. What will happen now?

Reviewer: maddie50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2009 - 01:33 am Title: The Garden of Mystery

Eek. What the hell is going on in that garden?

Reviewer: maddie50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2009 - 01:09 am Title: Friction at Fawkelands

Whoa. Are the Hunter-Foxes going back upstairs to work off that arousal?

Reviewer: Scary Bear Hair Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2009 - 03:07 am Title: Chelsea Smiles

Oh my, what a cliffhanger. I’m sure Lord Hunter-Fox will save Florence from worthless cad Alex (who is quickly sinking low in the depths of depravity if he is considering rape.) I suspect though, she won’t be able to sit down for awhile when he does. LOL!
Tilly will get to watch too. :D

I was actually hoping it would take a while for Lord Hunter-Fox to find Florence. I think the longer time would have made Florence appreciate him more and Lord Hunter-Fox would realize he is rather heavy handed when it comes to his wife. I suppose that will come later though.

I do think you have portrayed Jessie beautifully. She truly does think of herself as a worldly and modern woman, but she is so sweetly naive, especially when it comes Alex, that it makes her quite endearing. It’s rather interesting, but both Jessie and Vyvyan are the same way. I can’t help but think that when Vyvyan becomes a success, he will be swindled, unless he has a shrewd businessman looking over his investments like Lord Hunter-Fox.

So now we know Alex’s relationship to Lord Hunter-Fox, but what about Agnes? I am so curious to see how all these different plot lines will weave together.

Excellent chapter my dear!

Reviewer: alphabetjunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2009 - 08:31 pm Title: Chelsea Smiles

You are wicked! Leaving off at such a place....I'm going to be utterly distracted now until you update again. Well, my guess was once again wrong (I might as well give up predicting anything for your plot is so wonderfully twisted); I had thought that Alex was either Lord Hunter-Fox's child or that his first wife had had an affair that produced Alex. If I were in Florence's shoes I'm not sure how much I would relish being rescued by Lord Hunter-Fox. Anyway, I can't wait to read more...please update soon.

Reviewer: bluealieness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2009 - 04:51 pm Title: Chelsea Smiles

oh dear! florence is in for it now. poor flornece. excellent writing! :D

Author's Response: Hello, you! Thanks! Yes, I think Florence might be out of the frying pan and into the fire...

Reviewer: bluealieness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2009 - 08:04 pm Title: The Garden of Mystery

oooh!!!! look at florence's spunk. keep up the great work. :D

Reviewer: Scary Bear Hair Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2009 - 04:47 pm Title: The Garden of Mystery

Oooo Shez, this is so exciting! I actually hope Florence gets away and makes it to London. If Florence stays in the city, she may see what she did to Molly and realize her error. Also Lord Hunter-Fox will realize he is smothering poor Florence. He needs to hold on loosely or he will lose control, just like the song. LOL

Anyway, I love the delectable smut at the beginning. Lord Hunter-Fox is so domineering and commanding in bed. It just makes me swoon! LOL!

Tilly is quite cheeky with Florence, insisting that she dress her. I have to laugh that Tilly loves her job! LOL
She is playing with fire though, fetching the key to the garden.

Your description of the secret garden was excellent. I mean was there, with Florence, getting scratched by branches and having little dead sticker brushes clinging to my clothes. I suppose you already know you are wonderful at setting a scene, but I thought I would tell you anyway.

So why was Lord Hunter-Fox so angry. And who is G H-F. Was he Robert’s brother? And did Agnes run off with her brother-in-law? This is such a mystery! I want to know! LOL

Anyway, fantastic chapter my dear! I am so caught up in this story! It’s sooo good!

Reviewer: Slytherinswench Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2009 - 01:24 am Title: Friction at Fawkelands

Alas, no babies this year? Unfortunate! I suppose I shall just hang, suspended with anticipation for your chapters then.*grin*

It would be a terribly arcane arrangement anyway, I'm afraid. Instead of barefoot and pregnant, I'd keep you barefoot at the computer writing this glorious smut for me. 

Another delicious installment. I am salivating to find out what happened to Lady Agnes. I wonder if Florence and Tilly will... And what will happen when Florence is again in range of Alex. Jess! Is her "benefactor" going to find her? Whatever shall Vyvyan do? *grins again* I love the rich backdrop, the angst of it all, and of course, the great sex. 

Again, my most greedy self can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Damiana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2009 - 02:22 pm Title: Friction at Fawkelands

This chapter is way hot! And the peeping Tilly certainly makes it even better. Gotta love those over-sized keyholes.

Oh! and a tantalizing tidbit about Lady Agnes...did she leave him for another man? Now I'm dying to know what she did...

Typo alert!
Now it was deeper in colour, swollen, and glistening slightly with what much surely be her female juices.--- what MUST surely

Reviewer: Damiana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2009 - 01:43 pm Title: At the Palace

The end of this chapter is almost like a fairy tale in reverse. Molly pricks her finger and nothing happens, Mary meets a rich prince but is not swept off of her feet.

Knowing that something terrible will happen eventually, it almost makes one wish that all of London had fallen asleep when blood was drawn by Molly's needle.

Reviewer: alphabetjunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2009 - 11:49 pm Title: Approaching Menace

Florence truly doesn't seem to know when to stop pushing. She really must like being punished...I can't say that I blame her. She should really try to learn to be more subtle.
I'm still quite curious as to what is going on with all those girls and that 'machine' ... your writing is so great that the curiosity you've built up is distracting me from the smut!

Reviewer: alphabetjunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2009 - 11:10 am Title: Lessons

Well, at least one of my thoughts about this story was right. I had Lord Hunter-Fox pegged for one to give out punishments. Although, your wonderfully constructed plot full of twists and turns has thus far proved me wrong on I believe every other prediction I've ventured to make. I don't think that Florence will learn so easily though...I see many more punishments in her future.

Reviewer: Scary Bear Hair Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2009 - 10:53 pm Title: Friction at Fawkelands

Well as you already know, I absolutely loved this chapter! :D
Somehow I just get all squirmy when Lord Hunter-Fox gets strict. LOL!
I loved it too when Tilly mentioned how he applied discipline to the staff. Did Tilly just make that up to rankle Florence, or is it true? LOL

It’s funny, but I somewhat sympathize with Florence. I think having your husband talking about your behavior to the staff would be horribly embarrassing. Yet I also think Florence is so ridiculously snobby, she deserves every painful paddling she gets. Here she should be trying to make friends with Tilly and the staff. That way she could find out all about the first Lady Hunter-Fox, but noooo, she is so convinced she is above everybody, she has left herself without a friend.
By the way, what did happen with the first Lady Hunter-Fox?

I thought that was an excellent way to show Florence’s punishment, having Tilly spy on them. I had to laugh to that it got Tilly excited. Will Tilly get to apply soothing balm on Florence’s bum? I think she would like that. LOL

Anyway, you know I loved this. It was a fantastic chapter! You’re so wonderfully descriptive and I do believe we pretty much share the same kink!

Thank you bunches! Scary B

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