Date: Feb 24, 2009 - 01:39 am Title: Prologue
Just absolutely loved this... I actually cried in various areas, just emotional for me since I have followed this storyline from the start. Loved the visual descriptions. Now have many other Fans reading this. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for your support and kind words...they are truly appreciated despite the extreme lateness of my response.
Date: Aug 11, 2008 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Comfort
I love this story. I love this story. Okay, chanting is silly. Your imagery is lovely, your voices are true to Jossian myth and your characters are perfect. It's like reading the first episodes of a Buffy story arc on a spoiler site.
Date: Jun 26, 2008 - 12:56 pm Title: Prologue
Caught, I love how this story twists and turns like an episode or short arc in the Buffy series. The use of magic, logic and the always Jossian "well, let's try it and see what happens - we might die, but ... okie dokie" is wonderful. You capture the voices and language use so perfectly that I can hear the characters in my head in the actors' voices. Your imagery is also delightful, with a lovely mix of dialoge, thought and scene setting. I always look forward to your updates.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you're enjoying it and hope that the story continues to delight and intrigue you until the last word's read. I appreciate you taking the time to post a comment. Thank you again.