Penname: thalassa [Contact] Real name: M'ela
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Summary: Ivy Chandler, socialite attends the opening of the newly refurbished Detroit's Michigan Central Station, and meets the mysterious Russian mogul who is smitten with her dark beauty and alabaster skin. After a passionate tango, passion of a darker nature ensue high in the terminal's refurbished tower. Will Ivy escape from his compelling clutches? Does she want to?
Categories: The Library > More than Human
Characters: None
Content Notes: Alternate Universe/Reality
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Alternate Universe
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2776 Read Count: 33
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2011 Updated: May 09, 2011
Reviewer: thalassa Signed
Date: May 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a nice story. I enjoyed reading it. The only part I did not like was about the busts. It produced a somewhat incongrous image and was something of a turn off (why would anyone wish to have sex in a room containing the bust of the second one?). Other than this, the story was very pleasant and I look forward to reading more about your Ivy's adventures.

PS I particularly liked your game with the words in Mr. Coldbloods name. It was most fitting

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