Penname: Tamin [Contact] Real name: Tamin
Member Since: May 15, 2008
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I've been writing poetry since I was 15 and My mother read My diary. The diary was filled with typical adolescent angst about bad parenting. She wasn't happy. I wasn't happy about the invasion of My privacy so I turned to verse. I could express My self metaphorically and she was none the wiser.

My writing has always been just for Me until an office mate during our Doc program saw Me creating one day and asked if she could read it. Having read one, she wanted to read more. And so it went that I started sharing My writing.

I would really like to improve My skills and craft. I welcome readers to leave feedback. I'm self taught. There's always room for improvement!

Gender: female
Editor/Beta Reader: Yes
Age: 44
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Reviews by Tamin
brandy~wine by Benevolent Goddess Rated: 2 - Provocative [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A taste of your honeyed skin...
Categories: The Salon > Ladies > Poetry > The Ecstasy
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37 Read Count: 80
[Report This] Published: Apr 24, 2007 Updated: Apr 24, 2007
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*deep sigh* yum! That's good stuff.

butterfly by Benevolent Goddess Rated: 4 - Wanton starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: "peaceful butterfly"
Categories: The Salon > Gentlemen > Poetry > The Ecstasy
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9 Read Count: 58
[Report This] Published: Apr 24, 2007 Updated: Apr 24, 2007
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great contrast in the photo and in your words. They strike a nice balance together. ~~Tamin

In Irish Wood by Western Light Rated: 1 - Conservative [Reviews - 1]
Summary: In Irish wood I walked with her in filtered rays of sun
Categories: The Salon > Ladies > Poetry > The Ecstasy
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93 Read Count: 1482
[Report This] Published: Apr 05, 2008 Updated: Apr 05, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

deliciously sweet. Well presented!

She's Still Alone by CaughtNTheQuiet Rated: 1 - Conservative [Reviews - 1]
Summary: when the sun goes down
Categories: The Salon > Ladies > Poetry > The Agony
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98 Read Count: 1577
[Report This] Published: Apr 10, 2008 Updated: Apr 10, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is wonderfully poignant. I can certainly relate.

The Popsicles by teddybearsubmissive Rated: 3 - Risqué starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A cold treat used in an exceptionally delicious way.
Categories: The Attic > Of Submission > Service
Characters: None
Content Notes: BDSM
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4068 Read Count: 65
[Report This] Published: Jun 10, 2008 Updated: Jun 10, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoa!! Hot!! Very hot!! Well done.

Flickering Lights by CaughtNTheQuiet Rated: 1 - Conservative [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Poem
Categories: The Bedroom > Poetry > The Exploration
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54 Read Count: 1359
[Report This] Published: Jun 19, 2008 Updated: Jun 19, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Flickering Lights

Deliciously rendered. All of My senses are engaged - just as the lovers. I also like the marking of the passage of time. Great elements combined effectively.

I Feel You by CaughtNTheQuiet Rated: 1 - Conservative [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Poetry
Categories: The Bedroom > Poetry > The Exploration
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74 Read Count: 1632
[Report This] Published: Jun 19, 2008 Updated: Jun 19, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: I Feel You

ah...how many times have I lived this moment?? You've captured it well. What a delight! Thank you for sharing!

My Heart by CaughtNTheQuiet Rated: 1 - Conservative starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Poetry
Categories: The Bedroom > Poetry > The Agony
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62 Read Count: 1455
[Report This] Published: Jun 19, 2008 Updated: Jun 19, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: My Heart

Very intriguing! I especially like the tension between what we think we know as a reader (within the lines 'to have and to hold...') and what we're left to wonder about (within the lines 'the key is lost..'). Nicely crafted!

A Star From Heaven by bednhead69 Rated: 1 - Conservative [Reviews - 2]
Summary: written for my mom's 90th birthday...
Categories: The Library > Poetry
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89 Read Count: 1385
[Report This] Published: Jun 20, 2008 Updated: Jun 20, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Star From Heaven

I delight in reading this! There is such wonderful depth in each stanza and collectively the message is wonderful. Well done! :)

Author's Response: Thanks the comment Tamin, glad you enjoyed it...

Hunting Girl by Doctor Flotsom Rated: 3 - Risqué [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A rough caretaker encounters a beautiful young lady in a fox hunt. The young lady lingers, enchants, and then leads the young man to the stables where they engage in some rather unusual erotic interaction.
Categories: The Attic > The Lady Dominant > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: BDSM, Bondage, Dominance/submission, Exhibitionism, Fetish, Heterosexual, Humiliation, Sexual toys
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2651 Read Count: 160
[Report This] Published: Jun 20, 2008 Updated: Jun 20, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Hunting Girl

This is a wonderful piece! I've friends who enjoy pony play. I was easily able to 'see' the actions and training you described. You've captured the Trainer's attitude and the pony's struggle with pleasure and pain very believably! Thank you so much for sharing!

Author's Response: Your reading and enjoying is greatly appreciated!

Summary: Past Featured StoryA young woman finds herself caught between a condemned vampire set on ravaging her, and a powerful lord who wants to dominate her, as a power struggle rips through the Dark Aristocracy.
Categories: The Bedroom > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: Alternate Universe/Reality, Anal sex, Angst - Torment, anguish, Bondage, Character Death, Dominance/submission, Drama, Foul Language, Handjob/Fingering, Heterosexual, Hurt/Comfort, Lycanthrope (werewolf, werecat etc), Mind Control/Hypnosis, Oral sex, Romance, Vamp - Vampire, Violence - Story contains violence/blood/gore/etc., Work In Progress
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13355 Read Count: 362
[Report This] Published: Jun 25, 2008 Updated: Jul 17, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well written with a nice balance of detail and intrigue.

Cosmic Dreams by bednhead69 Rated: 1 - Conservative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: this one has a subtle twist to it....hope ya enjoy
Categories: The Library > Poetry
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105 Read Count: 1538
[Report This] Published: Jul 04, 2008 Updated: Jul 04, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Cosmic Dreams

I really like the pattern that's embedded! I tend to do things like that too! Very clever and the work holds together exceptionally well. I enjoy the steady creative imagery leading Me through the cosmos. Well crafted from A-Z!!

Author's Response: Thanks alot Tamin....really enjoyed doing this one..had alot of fun with it....

Bound by bednhead69 Rated: 1 - Conservative starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: an erotic encounter
Categories: The Library > Poetry
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122 Read Count: 1301
[Report This] Published: Aug 01, 2008 Updated: Aug 01, 2008
Reviewer: Tamin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Aug 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

mmmmmmmmm...this is wonderful! I love the imagery. you have a marvelous manner of bringing visuals to the fore. What a delight. Thank you for sharing, MC!!

Best, ~~Tamin

Author's Response: thank you Tamin...glad you enjoyed this one..

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