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Author Topic: A Haiku or two  (Read 1115 times)
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« Reply #30 on: October 08, 2008, 12:31:03 AM »

*behaves*

Alas, dear Poobah
I will I do I promise Grin
Wasnít me, buddy!
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« Reply #31 on: October 08, 2008, 01:38:57 PM »

Poobah of this place
It puts a grin on my face
Until I get maced

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« Reply #32 on: October 08, 2008, 05:09:00 PM »

To Mace or not  Mace
It's all downhill from there
rock scissors paper
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« Reply #33 on: October 08, 2008, 11:23:16 PM »

A bold little girl.
something matters very much
Looks for a star stamp Sad
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« Reply #34 on: October 09, 2008, 08:16:12 AM »

*laughs*

Well I am still protesting whether possessive "s" adds a syllable or not! 

Thus your second to last one is questionable IMHO.  And I am DTM after all.   Grin

(Although your last one is correct!)

Still waiting for a "clean" non-disputable one. *fingers my Gold star sheet*


Sometimes I want this
And sometimes I prefer that
A politician
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« Reply #35 on: October 09, 2008, 10:46:37 AM »


If your possessive notation relates to "It's" I can satisfy your concern
it is ONE syllable.  Grin


A sob myself blue
first I beg  and now hardball
I have been so good! Shocked
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« Reply #36 on: October 09, 2008, 12:21:05 PM »

Ummm. So if "It's" = 1 syllable then that Haiku was a 5-6-5.  If you had used "It is" then it would have worked.

It's all down-hill from there = 6

It is all down-hill from there = 7

I swear I'm just following the rules you listed at the start of this game!

So begging for gold
On a Haiku that is wrong
You will wait for long

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« Reply #37 on: October 09, 2008, 02:41:36 PM »

I always fancied
A Possessive Man trait. No
Characteristic!


I have given up
My longing for a star stamp
Elephant instead!!!!!
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« Reply #38 on: October 09, 2008, 04:09:55 PM »

And then there were two
Both following all the rules
Two gold stars for you!
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« Reply #39 on: October 09, 2008, 08:39:59 PM »

Thanksgiving weekend
Early for us Canucks, eh?
Yanks get it next month.
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« Reply #40 on: October 12, 2008, 09:42:27 PM »

Oh no the pressure !
is measured by star amount!
Two so far. Sweet bliss



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« Reply #41 on: October 13, 2008, 10:53:25 AM »

Aerio my cat
Blocking my screen and wanting
His food right now, eh!
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« Reply #42 on: October 13, 2008, 10:01:57 PM »

Itís not about you
it's not even about me
Its how many stars. Shocked
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« Reply #43 on: October 14, 2008, 08:47:21 AM »

The Price is Right, bitch
Drew or Bob, it is all good
Spin that wheel pronto!
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« Reply #44 on: October 14, 2008, 09:21:55 AM »

Looks at all the lines
Sees how good everyone does
Gold stars all around!
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