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Reviewer: susden Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2013 09:59 pm Title: On the Other Side of Midnight II

  Wonderful.

Please, write more when you have time +

    Will they grow more comfortable with their feelings for each other ?

Waiting  with curiosity.

Reviewer: RedsAttic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2012 05:44 pm Title: On the Other Side of Midnight II

EXCELLENT!!!!!

Reviewer: Ele Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2011 11:16 am Title: On the Other Side of Midnight II

Thank you for this lovely piece. A part of me is disappointed that there isn't more. This feels like the foundations (of trust between Hermione and Professor Snape) needed for a bigger story.

However, I can see the merrit of leaving it here, just as a tender message of what a little warmth can do to make life easier.

I enjoyed your writing style and would love to read another long story from you!

Reviewer: Samantha_McKay Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2010 06:28 pm Title: On the Other Side of Midnight II

I am so in love with this story! I love the progression of things, it seems to fit well, nothing is too rushed. This to me exactly how things would have to happen for it to be believable.

 

I so look forward to more. 

Reviewer: Indigomiko Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2010 11:54 pm Title: On the Other Side of Midnight II

This is a wonderful story. It feels like I'm seeing into the background of what was written in OoTP. I see that you haven't updated in a few months and really hope that you continue to work on this story. I'd love to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: muse_malade Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2010 09:36 am Title: On the Other Side of Midnight II

This is a truly heartbreaking story and I can't wait to see how it follows. Updaaaate! I loved it :)

Reviewer: Prissz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2010 02:14 pm Title: The Vulnerable Spot

Wow, two chapter updates so close together!  This is wonderful  :-)

Loved the chapter, by the way. 

Reviewer: Prissz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2010 10:03 pm Title: A Weakness Unforgiven

Loved the chapter!  I was so excited to see that it had been updated... keep up the good work  :-)

Reviewer: Prissz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 07:52 pm Title: The Best of Memories

I am really enjoying your story.  It is creative and well written too.  I'm looking forward to reading more... update soon  :-)

Reviewer: genesismom Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2010 04:22 pm Title: The Best of Memories

I have read this story on a different site and it stops at chapter ten.  Please continue and finish this story, it is too good to just leave hanging.  Also it would be nice if you returned to the other site or sites and finished it there as well for the readers that do not know this site.  Thank you and please keep writing.

Reviewer: lisp010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2010 09:44 pm Title: Secrets to be Kept

you should publish!!!!!

Reviewer: Slytherin_Me Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2010 10:24 pm Title: Secrets to be Kept

I absolutely LOVE this story.  The moment between Hermione and Severus at Grimmauld Place just touched my heart.  Seeing him like that was so heartbreaking and yet sweet..to see that side of him.  I eagerly await each chapter..  I look forward to seeing how this will unfold between them.  Thank you SO much for sharing it!! :)

Reviewer: Jinxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2010 05:15 pm Title: The Need to Know

Good excuse you came up with for Hermione to be sure of whom Lily is even though she's pretty sure.  What will she do with the knowledge of knowing whom Lily was?

Great idea of Snape being able to see the incident at Grimauld place and to view it again!  It gives him greater clarity and understanding on her actions.

I like the background you've created for Lucius and Snape - it leads to and kind of explains why Narcissa goes to him and asks him to take the Unbreakable Vow in HBP.

 Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Reviewer: Jinxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2010 05:07 pm Title: Shifts in the Universe

I like how you portrayed Snape's insecurities they seem plausible to explain his behaviour in canon.  

Reviewer: Jinxie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2010 11:11 am Title: A Different Kind of Pain

Great way to reveal to him that Hermione helped him and he suspects she heard him speak of Lily.

Reviewer: Jinxie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2010 11:07 am Title: On the Edge of the Night

Interesting to see Snape with his guard down.  It must've left quite an impression on Hermione.

Reviewer: caddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 11:31 pm Title: On the Edge of the Night

Beautifully written, and well imagined--please keep writing, and I will keep reading! :)

Reviewer: Kryslia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2010 07:34 pm Title: A Different Kind of Pain

This has the start of a great story. Very well written and a awesome story line. Are you going to continue on with it? I hope so..will be looking for more chapters in the future. Great job!

Reviewer: ChloeWeir Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 06:49 pm Title: On the Edge of the Night

Oooh,I'm intrigued! Would love to read more!

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