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Reviewer: Kaemari Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2018 12:57 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

This story is so wonderful! You have done justice to the characters in a marvelous way. 

Reviewer: barton Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2015 10:20 pm Title: A Most Important Element in Water

great story! the Sun Tzu and Austen quotes (P&P, Emma) are a lovely addition. I appreciate the 'noble' characters.  I'm tired of slamming of RW, AD, MW, etc. in other stories. thank you. 

Reviewer: Rain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2015 05:23 pm Title: A Most Important Element in Water

You are an excellent writer and I dare say this is one of the best stories I've ever read. I couldnt put it down, and enjoyed every moment. I hope you continue to write, and thank you for letting me into your world. Best wishes.

Reviewer: Jill8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2012 06:09 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

Forgot to do the rating! 

Reviewer: Jill8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2012 06:08 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

This is a wonderful story. It's very refreshing to read something which is a little different. 

My congratulations!

 Jill 

Reviewer: Indigomiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2010 11:46 pm Title: A Most Important Element in Water

This story rocks my socks. I love how Snape shows up, ignores Harry's bloodthirsty rage and starts lecturing about dementors. I can so picture it and it's hysterical. I can just seen Snape wrapped up in his teaching robes standing in the fog with dementors all around, and being put out that he had to be there to correct Potter's idiocy once again.

Reviewer: kazezero Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2010 01:32 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

This story is really brilliant! Ever since I started reading the first chapter, I couldn't stop reading. The complexities and developments of the characters, plot and pacing are well thought out and analyzed. The references to Sun Tzu's book "The Art of War" to the current war happening in the story make the situation more relevant and realistic. Its refreshing to read a story that includes a larger perspective that relates to what really happens in a war, rather than be limited to Harry Potter's point of view. I also love, especially, how Snape and Hermione really stay consistently in character, while at the same time, I really enjoy the author (sylvanawood)'s interpretations of what their characters can be. Their conversations are so intriguing and fun! I feel as if they came out of the world and became real human beings. Great, great job!

Reviewer: lonerider63 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2008 07:50 pm Title: A Most Important Element in Water

Love this story. Glad to see Hermione and Severus getting together even if it is only a few minutes at a time. A little frustration is good for the soul! (he,he)

Reviewer: Ray Ray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2008 12:26 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

I am so glad you didn't marry Severus off! I was so worried. I love this story.

Author's Response: Thank you. Now, would I do such a thing? ;)

Reviewer: Ray Ray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/15/2008 07:22 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

I love Jane Austen and am so gladto see you merging some of my favorite books together!! I cannot wait to see what develops. Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! There'll be a few more Emma quotes, but I won't say more. :)

Reviewer: Ray Ray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2008 06:54 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

Great action sequence! Love the story. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: sinbad Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2008 10:47 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

Excellent story, you should also consider posting at The Petulant Poetess and Ashwinder.

Author's Response: Thank you. Apart from here, I'm posting on OWL, Ashwinder and ff.net.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 01:58 pm Title: A Most Important Element in Water

that stinks for hermione

Author's Response: It does, doesn't it? Let's hope she gets over it.

Reviewer: septentrion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 07:07 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

Thanks for keeping the Malfoys in character!

How long will Hermione last without telling Severus?

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think they are in character. :)
She's stubborn, as we know. We shall see.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 05:56 pm Title: Master of Deception

Are you kidding me? And you put in author's note that no one would review or read this? It's under top 10 favs and longest series and I've noticed that you put yourself as a favorite story. LOL!!

Author's Response: You seem to be a bit confused here, or maybe just want to troll. In a total of seven series, it's not really a great surprise to find this under the top ten. Series, apparently, aren't widely used, and thus, this being the longest doesn't say much either. So much to the series. Now to the story. I can't recall saying in the author's notes that the story isn't reviewed widely. I may have responded to a reviewer, since there have been several asking why this isn't reviewed more, but these are responses, not the authors' notes. It's not a popular story, that's why. What I said in the authors' notes is that this will be finished, whether someone reads it or not. And I certainly haven't put myself up as favourite author.

Reviewer: alecia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2008 09:10 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

I liked this story, it was intriguing and had a bit of mystery and certainly deception. You're not done writing, are you?????

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm not done for a long time, there's a lot more to come.

Reviewer: Maddie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2007 11:20 pm Title: A Most Important Element in Water

This is horrible. Is it really Snape that is going around killing everyone? Why is he being seen and reported on? Is this some kind of smear campaign? My Snape is a good Snape. At least the raid at the Weasleys's home ended with the capture of 2/3 of the DE strike force.

Author's Response: It is horrible. It will get worse, before it can get better. I hope you'll stick around. :)

Reviewer: Katia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2007 07:28 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

I've just read the Master of Deception series, up through this chapter, and I love it! I like that you gave Flitwick such an interesting family history, and have spent time developing the character of the new DADA prof. Is Perry Price actually Severus Snape, though? I noticed the PP/SS parallel, the fact that Price is one letter short of being Prince, and that Price got angry when Levicorupus was used against him. Keep up the excellent work on this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I can tell you that you will learn all about Perry Price, but more I can't tell you. The next chapter will be posted soon. :)

Reviewer: Maddie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 09:24 pm Title: A Most Important Element in Water

This Price guy keeps sounding like Snape at times when he is caught off guard. I know he is supposed to be a different person, not related and so forth, but am I really off base?

Author's Response: I am glad I can keep you guessing. :D And thank you for leaving me a review!

Reviewer: Ray Ray Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2007 02:34 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

Read to ch 12 on your live journal and I must say I am hooked! You have done a great service to Severus with this story. As a fervent Severus supporter I stand, clap and say "Bravo!!!" I cannot wait to read this story to its end.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The lj chapters aren't complete yet, they need beta-reading, and I made some adjustments, but I had to get them out there before DH. :)

Reviewer: snapdragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 06:38 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

I've added this story to my favorites and I hope you continue to finish it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D I have every intention of finishing this, no matter what happens in canon. I won't adapt it to new canon either, since it would mix up my plot. Unless there is something in real life that prevents me from doing it, this will be finished.

Reviewer: septentrion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2007 03:46 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

This story gets more interesting which each new chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad you still find it interesting.

Reviewer: lbs Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2007 07:15 am Title: A Different Perspective

It seems that you just might have something there. I just can't believe that Dumbledore did not have any idea that Snape would have to kill him (if he really is dead). Great insight!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) There are just too many hints, that Dumbledore and Snape kept each other informed about important things. Harry always misinterprets Snape's motives.

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 01:17 am Title: A Most Important Element in Water

I love this so far.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Brisinggammen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2007 04:22 pm Title: A Most Important Element in Water

Interesting chapter. I really liked Dudley's new girlfriend. Oh, and I'm quite curious about what is in that trunk of Lily's. Bit surprised about Petunia being so open with Hermione - would she really tell so much to someone "filthy"?

Author's Response: Thank you. I like to think that Petunia is so confused about Dudley's rebellion that she isn't quite herself. And she'll be rid of Harry for good soon, so maybe she's a bit less nasty as usual.

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