Date: 06/02/2015 12:20 am Title: Epilogue
In spite of the many spelling and grammar errors, I really enjoyed this story. A thorough editing would allow it to be read more smoothly, but it is fun to read even as it is.
Date: 06/09/2010 07:55 pm Title: "That" Night
It was a pretty good story, aside from the mistakes(you really need to get yourself a beta) and the fact that most of the chapters (20 through about 40) have way too many minute details and are completely boring. I had to skip a lot to keep myself reading to the end. It was also very confusing that you did not even hint at Severus and Hermione having sex, and then all of a sudden Hermione is pregnant. You don't even have to do a sex scene just say something like, "it turned out to be a very satisfying night after all."
Date: 03/08/2010 12:01 pm Title: Your Man P1
I totally don't understand Severus and Hermione. They are going to get married, they are ADULTS, they have a daughter for god's sake, so why can't they have sex? It's not as if they didn't have before because, again, they have a daughter! So I really don't understand why don't they share a bedroom, but that's not the top of it.
In a lot of situations they are acting like teenagers and not like the adults they supposed to be. When Hermione ran away and got drunk with Harry I was totally shocked. She is a mother, she is responsible for her child and she simply ran away, left her behind and got drunk because Snape told her the actual thruth? And then Hermione says that she likes the "old Snape" much more than the nice one... I'm totally lost and confused. Hermione is just simply doesn't behave like a mature person.
The other thing, Janie locked them in a room for almost a day and they didn't even mention it next time when they saw her. And it is Snape we are talking about who gives detention for every student inHogwarts for actually anything. It is wierd he didn't say anything.
So sometimes it is very hard to understand the characters and their motives and especially it is quite hard to follow their logic. Otherwise I like this story very much, because the whole idea and this universe is very very nice. I love your children characters very much, they are cute and so perfectly written. I am really sad that you did not made tha adults that perfect too...
Date: 07/27/2009 11:52 am Title: Epilogue
it was superb....i love this story...good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you love it! Thanks for sticking with the story and reviewing - it really means a lot!
Date: 05/13/2009 03:47 am Title: The Aftermath
love this story. is george going to get married
Author's Response: Thanks! :o)
You're really close...Actually, the closest so far! George is already married...
[Report This]Date: 05/09/2009 01:09 pm Title: Secrets Revealed
I read the first 12 chapters and have found this to be pretty good. I can't wait till I have time to read more.
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2009 02:11 am Title: The Aftermath
This has been a very enjoyable read. I can hardly wait for both the prequel and the epilogue.
[Report This]Date: 11/11/2008 12:29 am Title: Another New Year Begins
Oh my gosh...what's going to happen to him? Please let him be alright!!
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2008 11:54 pm Title: Summer
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! i cant wait to read the next chapter...THANX :o)
[Report This]Date: 01/16/2008 11:36 am Title: Secrets, Secrets are No Fun, Unless They're Shared With Everyone
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! i cant wait to read the next chapter!!! THANX :o)
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2007 11:01 pm Title: Secrets, Secrets are No Fun, Unless They're Shared With Everyone
write more. i love your story!
[Report This]Date: 10/27/2007 11:24 pm Title: How the Past Comes Back to Haunt Us
Great job! Looking foprward to how you wrap this up!!!
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2007 08:37 am Title: Snape Finds Out
The story's interesting so far, although, as many have pointed out,she was a very spherical baby. Also, there are no raccoons in England (unfortunately; cute buggers they are). Will keep reading.
[Report This]Date: 08/17/2007 11:58 pm Title: Home
I'm still laughing at Severus being happy to go to the Granger's house. What is he going to do when Eileen and the Grangers become friends? I hope Poppy has a surplus of Calming Drought because Severus will need it to handle everyone finding out about the baby, the wedding and the birth (I don't think he'll be in any shape to brew his own).
Lovely chapter. I'm thrilled that DH didn't stall or stop you from continuing your story.
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 02:22 pm Title: After the Battle
Love the story! I am so looking forward to the conversation between Severus and his mother!!!
[Report This]Date: 08/05/2007 06:32 pm Title: "That" Night
is it me or did you change the name of the chapter? or am i going insane? gosh i hope not....
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 07:53 pm Title: After the Battle
I read this when i was at my brothers and i cant believe that i didnt review! what was i thinking! obviously i wasnt. this was an awesome chapter. and almost a complete shocker cause i only read a a little bit while i was at ur house! i loved it as i always do! keep them coming and please put my baby in here please!
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 07:44 pm Title: After the Battle
I read this when i was at my brothers and i cant believe that i didnt review! what was i thinking! obviously i wasnt. this was an awesome chapter. and almost a complete shocker cause i only read a a little bit while i was at ur house! i loved it as i always do! keep them coming and please put my baby in here please!
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 07:42 pm Title: Kryptonite
AHHHHHHHHH! OMG! How can you have him attack CHILDREN! and then a BABY! wow the first time in how many years and he nails it on the head! haha sry!
[Report This]Date: 07/14/2007 02:47 pm Title: "That" Night
Great story so far...please, update soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2007 10:36 am Title: The Plan
Omgsh!! The broom !!!! xoxoxoxo
haha
very cunning
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2007 10:33 am Title: Harry Knows Something
Jeeze Long chapter!!! Gosh. I love it!
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2007 10:32 am Title: Diagon Alley
Omg, AWWWW!!!Halirious
xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2007 10:31 am Title: "That" Night
OMG!!! Great, I can't wait to read on,
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2007 08:02 am Title: The Trouble With Professors
Niceness K!!