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Reviewer: lonerider63 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/30/2010 07:45 pm Title: Well, I've Never. . .

This is a great read. I enjoyed reading it. I see it does not show completed. Please finish the story.

Reviewer: NoddyBadfaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2009 01:55 pm Title: Really I Haven't!

Good chapter very enjoyable read.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: NoddyBadfaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2009 01:35 pm Title: Well, I've Never. . .

Lovely simply lovely well written excellent characterizations. .

Reviewer: chickaboo Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2008 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love this! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Viara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2008 12:09 pm Title: Well, I've Never. . .

Wow, nicely written, hot story, i really like the pairing.


If you do not mind, i would point out just one thing: girls can loose their hymen without haveing sex.(or have it reduced to nearly undetectable) Using tampax is a quite obvious way (even if it only happens gradually). But other sports like horseriding, or riding a bike, or gimnastics can envolve certain movements that can cause the hymen rip. So the absense of it does not prove of one not being virging.
So... in that way even a broom accident could have caused hermione to loose hers, even if not the way she described it:P
On the other hand hand she is right: Ron is a prick (here), and if someone cannot treasure what he is given, virgin or not, he does not deserve it at all.
for reference, for example see wikipedia, especially point 4, "what may demage the hymen"
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hymen

Otherwhise, its really a splended work!

Reviewer: Morgaine Le Fay Pendragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2008 03:30 pm Title: Really I Haven't!

pleace continue the story

Reviewer: persefone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2008 05:19 am Title: Well, I've Never. . .

Hello! I?ve read it before notice it wasn?t finished and I?ve seen it?s been a while since you last updated it.Is there any sequel under any other name? I really liked your story and I sincerely hope you will eventually go on with it. Sorry if there?s any mistakes at writting but I can?t help it since english is not my first language! Go on writting,please! :)

Reviewer: Adrastea Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2007 05:27 pm Title: Really I Haven't!

Oh damn, that's brilliant! I didn't take the time to see if this story was finished but I sure as hell hope it's not. Really hoping to read more.

Reviewer: gwenivere73 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 12:39 am Title: Really I Haven't!

Yes, having both Sev and Lucius in one story is great. Though my interest is piqued by the cliffie about who Lucius is pining over. Can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: septentrion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2007 01:18 am Title: Really I Haven't!

I don't trust Hermione's statement at all ;)

Reviewer: January Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2007 10:59 pm Title: Well, I've Never. . .

Delightful.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Trins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2007 07:16 am Title: Well, I've Never. . .

That was amazing. Its just sad that it was finished, i could definatley read another few of those. :)

Author's Response: The sequel is being worked on as we speak. I just wanted to make sure that the rest of the story is separate from the challenge response. Thank you for the kind words, and hopefully you'll enjoy the follow up just as much. ;)

Reviewer: amsev Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2007 01:13 am Title: Well, I've Never. . .

LOVELY threesome. Too bad Lucius is pining for another, I think they make a great set.

Author's Response: Severus/Hermione/Lucius do make a delectable lemon layer cake, don't they? As for Lucius, he'll need someway to blow off steam while his lurv is coming around.

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