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Reviewer: lonerider63 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2012 10:22 pm Title: Visits and Worries

I like the story. I have been checking back every few months and haven't seen any progress. Is it abandoned?

Reviewer: gurlimargrethe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2009 06:03 am Title: Visits and Worries

just read this for the second time.Will you update or is the story abandoned? You should continue the story is very good

Reviewer: FlittterKat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2009 12:40 am Title: Visits and Worries

Very interesting story, I'm enjoying where you are taking them. I don't think Prof Snape is too ooc. I firmly believe under the right circumstances, he will show his feelings and act on them.

Reviewer: Sophronia-Asher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2009 12:43 pm Title: Visits and Worries

LoL, well good luck with your writer's block there! I know it's tough to get out off, especially if you've been so out of touch with fanfiction! Well, it's good to know you did not completely swear off fanfiction, and I do look forward to your next chapter. Good luck with it!

Reviewer: Sophronia-Asher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2009 11:29 am Title: The Death Phoenix

A dark one!! I'm excited! I do look forward to reading your future chapters! It's rare to find a dark-Hermoine fic, and written well at that! Wonderful, wonderful! 

Reviewer: maddie50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2008 01:37 am Title: Visits and Worries

An excellent story. Tragic and dark to be sure. Evil!Lucius is a total bastard and your characterization of him makes me shudder. I like your portrayal of Severus. He remains in character, yet he has the depth of personality that we don't see in the JKR books until #6. Harry is coming across as a perceptive young man, and that is believable, too. I am anxious to read more.

Reviewer: sinbad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2008 02:00 pm Title: Discipline of the Mind

Excellent work, I'm looking forward to an update.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2008 05:49 pm Title: Visits and Worries

love it!!:) update soon!!

Reviewer: sinbad Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2008 01:49 pm Title: Visits and Worries

This story is developing nicely.  I hope you conquer your writers block.

Reviewer: portugal_faro Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 07:05 pm Title: Visits and Worries

I only started reading this story tonight and read all chapters at once. I really like and think there's probably alot more trials for hermione to come. many thanks, its very well written

Reviewer: rdholmantx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 11:12 pm Title: Simple Gifts

Oi, This story is fantastic, I was so happy to see the update today. I really like the dark, edginess to it all.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed star [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2008 04:15 pm Title: Gatherings

cool love the story and yeah i like this story. i did not know that narcissa died and i think i may have a good idea how. anyways it's sweet

Reviewer: RedsAttic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2008 09:37 pm Title: Gatherings

EXCELLENT!

Reviewer: sinbad Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 07:59 pm Title: Gatherings

Very good story, I'm looking forward to updates!

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 05:49 pm Title: Gatherings

Too cool--I'm so happy that Hermione's mystery room helped her to recharge her batteries/rediscover her inner and outer equilibrium--brilliant!  Poor Draco, to suffer such a shite of a father...thank God he has Professor Snape!

Reviewer: alecia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 09:44 am Title: Flowing Gems of Purity

when are you going to put the next chapter up?

Reviewer: RedsAttic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2008 12:56 pm Title: Flowing Gems of Purity

EXCELLENT!

Reviewer: Ray Ray Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2008 06:20 pm Title: Flowing Gems of Purity

DarkFate I love you! Your stories are so original, touching and captivating. I love this story and how you are showing how one heals from trauma, slowly and with much determination. I early anticipate further installments and cannot wait to see how you get Draco and 'Mione together - I'm going to guess the chamber is a Slytherin secret...

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 05:00 pm Title: Flowing Gems of Purity

Interesting...too cool.  I'm happy that Hermione will be able to sleep better due to the tranquility curtain she had passed through. 

I eagerly await further installments.  Take care.  ;-)

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 04:46 pm Title: Compliments From Snape?! Never!

SelfDefense!Hermione going to kick your butt...I love it!  I can't wait to see what happens during Christmas vacation.  ;-)

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 04:17 pm Title: Memories

More therapy with Professor Snape.  ;-)

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 04:04 pm Title: The Forest

Well, at least she finally vented some of the poison from her system, so to speak.  :-)

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 03:54 pm Title: The Lessons Begin

Cool, KickArse!Hermione is conceived, LOL.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 03:48 pm Title: Discipline of the Mind

Bummer about Draco's mother, at least Hermione now has a different perspective on his mindset.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/07/2008 03:40 pm Title: The Trio Reunited

Story content is well written,  however you need to remember to capitalize the first letter of the first word at the beginning of a sentence, paragragh, or what have you (my 13 year old daughter said that you needed to be reminded of that rule).  ;-)

Author's Response: hey! thanks for pointing that out to me...I admit I'm lazy when it comes to grammer...I'll be sure to fix that in the future chapters. LOL and thanks to your daughter for so kindly pointing out my horrid grammer ;) anyways, glad you like this! :D thanks for the reviews

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