Date: 05/31/2020 04:10 am Title: Chapter 11: Shall We Dance?
Todo bien, pero falta lógica. Ninguna chica y Hermione menos hubiese aceptado besos de otro, cuando hombre deseado inesperadamente le invite a vailar y cocetear. Si Snape la hubiese ignorado en el vaile allí si, pero de este modo no tiene sentido. ..
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2011 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 13: Dillemma
I loooove this story and simply adore your writing style!
Date: 07/23/2009 06:08 am Title: Chapter 21: Return to Spinner's End
Beautiful story yet again. It was nice to see the relationship grow over so much more time than other stories. It's really more butterfly inspiring that way.
Date: 06/21/2009 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 13: Dillemma
Yours a/n was VERY accurate! And I was so shocked when I read about his erection- I didn't think that here would be something like that xD
Date: 06/21/2009 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 11: Shall We Dance?
AWWW!!! Poor Snape and foolish Hermione! I like your story and I hope that she would be more sane.
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 21: Return to Spinner's End
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Five months!!
Oh, you can feel Snape’s relief wafting from the screen!
A fantastic story, a pleasure to read, simply wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for all of your lovely and long reviews! I was relieved to get any on this site at all - it did so much better everywhere else!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 20: Wishing You Were Here...
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Poor Hermione! Poor Severus doesn’t know what to do with himself!
She was pregnant?
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 19: Mayhem at the Ministry: Part 2
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Yes, she has the malice – but she has the remorse to balance it!
Love DOES win the day!
Oh no!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 18: Mayhem at the Ministry: Part 1
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They desecrated the statue? Very metaphoric imagery!
Ooooooooooh *shudders* Go Hermione! Oh goodness, does Hermione have the malice to cast that?
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 17: The War Within
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Cuddles!
Eight hours…
Oh, beautiful, perfect!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Calling
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Ah, Albus finally realises the effects of his meddling.
Poor Severus!
Oh, Voldemort knows… but will love conquer all?
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 15: Farewell's & Forgiveness
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Oh, he’s smitten – no woman looks good when she’s crying! And he thinks she’s beautiful! Poor Hermione, she worries enough for everyone!
You could cut the tension with a blunt spoon!
Oh! A beautiful kiss!
Oh, she loves him – has anyone ever said they love him?
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 14: Decisions...
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Thank goodness Anthony is smart!
And they’re skirting around the issue in the meeting! What is McGonagall achieving by avoiding the issue?
Oh, NEWTs one week sooner! Poor Hermione will have kittens – not to mention nag Harry and Ron to distraction!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 13: Dillemma
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Oh heck! The dementors are back – and Hermione is the first of the students to realise?
Well, Snape’s human after all! Lol!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 12: Hogsmeade
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Oh, jealousy has softened him a little bit.
Poor Snape! But it is his own fault!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 11: Shall We Dance?
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That dress sounds so exquisite! Perfect and elegant!
Thank goodness that Hermione has more taste than Lockheart! Pink and red are rather tacky, plus the gold, silver and cream are sort of Christmasy and a reminder that they missed one ball and this is more of a stand-in.
Ooooh! Salsa!
Awwww! Kisses… I wouldn’t want to by Anthony with a jealous Snape on the warpath!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 10: Kindly Take Your Leave...
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I was thinking along the same lines as Hermione – you can’t plan that in 7 days! I bet Hermione has a few choice words for the headmaster!
And Snape finally admits… something!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 9: Closed Doors
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Oh, this should be interesting! Her friends are severely lacking in perception!
Ooooh! Snape’s jealous! Though, it is wonderful to see Harry burry the hatchet with some of the Slytherins!
Snape has a ‘Kill when no longer a student list’? I wonder if Albus knows? Though, the headmaster probably DOES know, and chuckles away at it!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: Back to Formalities...
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Denial is NOT a river in Egypt! Silly Snape!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 7: On the First Day of Christmas...
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I think she’d look beautiful in copper robes! Not to mention that copper is one of the elements of ancient alchemy!
Awww! Isn’t he thoughtful!
Such a personal (and expensive) gift for Severus – or has Albus helped with that?
I wonder when she last had a good cry? When did she last let out all of her bottled up feelings? And when last did Severus Snape have a witch sobbing on his shoulder?
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 6: Confronting Christmas Eve
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Finally, the property stops and they curse away! Lol!
Finally! Someone speaks to Hermione as the adult she is!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 5: Delivering Bad Tidings
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*lovely* The Dark Lord gives out a Christmas bonus! Yuck!
I think Albus’s eyes are twinkling more than they usually are!
Good grief, are pigs flying past the window? Has Hell frozen over? Or is Snape actually jealous of Harry and Ron because they get a HUG? *giggles*
Keeping someone that intelligent out of the loop is never a good plan; she’s had her mind exploited by Harry and Ron for years, she’s an adult and treated like a child!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: Of Riddled Wanderings
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It is as if the atmosphere wants to throw them together by snowing them in! But what could be more romantic than snow?!
And Voldemort ruins the mood by summoning him! Hmph, Dark Lords, they’re rather inconvenient at times! Lol! Or, more accurately, Malfoys are inconvenient!
Hermione knows what she’s doing, I wonder where she learnt that? Oh, a little tenderness has melted the ice cage around his heart!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 3: Acceptance
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Hermione shows her maturity in ignoring the insults – whereas Snape shows his immaturity by saying the insults in the first place!
Snape has Pride and Prejudice? I wasn’t expecting that!
Dress robes for dinner! Flipping heck!
I think Dumbledore got it right! Snape would have probably seen Harry as James (and THAT could never end well); and he’d probably have strangled Ron! Hermione is very similar to him, and has the grace to deal with Snape like an adult!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2008 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 2: Spinner's End
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I wonder what Snape was calling Albus in his head at that moment?! Lol!
Hermione at least knows how she has upset Snape – or, more accurately, how Albus has upset him! She’s apologised politely (even though it isn’t her fault) and has most likely knocked him for six in the process!
Snape isn’t exactly a graceful host, is he? I wonder if he’s ever been a host to anyone? Or is he just so antisocial?