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Reviewer: neelix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2008 04:40 am Title: Chapter 18: Favorable Circumstances

Hey there brandy - another great story - I really enjoyed it.
You might want to edit the last chapter a little - Hermione should have been DILATING, not DILUTING....

I know its just a typo but it changes the meaning of the sentence!

Nice work though :)

Reviewer: lonerider63 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2008 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 18: Favorable Circumstances

Very well written story making it a very good read.. Please write more.

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