Date: 08/31/2008 04:40 am Title: Chapter 18: Favorable Circumstances
Hey there brandy - another great story - I really enjoyed it.
You might want to edit the last chapter a little - Hermione should have been DILATING, not DILUTING....
I know its just a typo but it changes the meaning of the sentence!
Nice work though :)
Date: 08/26/2008 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 18: Favorable Circumstances
Very well written story making it a very good read.. Please write more.