Date: 02/08/2021 11:46 pm Title: Allegiance
Wow, I've just read all 24 Chapters in a few hours and I absolutely love it! The dynamic between Severus and Hermione is just so interesting to see and I'm truly impressed that you managed to really keep them in character. Quite keen to read what will happen at the Malfoy Ball and how things with Ron will play out.
Can't wait for you to update (hopefully!) soon and read what happens next!
ps: I love all the smut :D
Date: 08/05/2018 07:14 pm Title: You Just Might Get It
I like your story and how you describe snapes decelopment.
Date: 06/01/2018 11:12 am Title: Allegiance
Love love love this story
Date: 10/13/2017 07:46 pm Title: Kindred, Broken Spirits
That was lovely. Snape really understood, and of course the part he'd best be able to relate to in Hermione would be her pain and her loss, since he's had so much of that.
Date: 10/13/2017 05:44 pm Title: Face to Face
Wow. There have been lots of versions of the Marriage Law, but the one you've come up with is particularly arbitrary. I guess I'm glad I'm a Muggle. :-)
By the way, "fiancée" is the feminine form of the word; it means "a woman to whom one is engaged." The male form of the word -- a man to whom one is engaged -- doesn't have the final "e," so it's "fiancé." This means that Hermione is Snape's fiancée, but Snape is Hermione's fiancé.
Date: 10/13/2017 05:33 pm Title: Reluctant Paramours
We readers are all familiar with the Marriage Challenge, but the CHARACTERS aren't, so there needs to be some set-up for them to become aware of the law. Hasn't the law been publicized? Aren't any other students or teachers affected by it? Why does no one seem to know what's going on?
Date: 07/09/2016 09:54 pm Title: Allegiance
Nice chapter looking forward to a new chapter.
Date: 05/01/2016 05:12 am Title: Allegiance
I've really enjoyed this story so far and I am looking forward to reading all about the ball. Thank you!
Date: 11/16/2015 08:41 am Title: Allegiance
just in case you are still at it, continue please! this is the 188 rewiev, and i cant wait to read how ss and hg come even closer and more comfy with each other :D
Date: 11/16/2015 12:36 am Title: Calm Before the Storm
dear author, you got me depressed with your descriptions of Hermione's thoughts, well done indeed! Right now I feel like I'm the one being made marry someone detestable, weird but proof of your awesome writing style! (sry am no native engl speaker, is it awesome or aweful?? Anyways, you are great ;) )
Date: 07/19/2015 08:19 am Title: Kindred, Broken Spirits
Just found and read this story in its entirety loved it. Love the interactions between Hermione as a young girl on the cusp of becoming a woman, the interplay she and Ron have is also really believable of a first love. Severus as a possessive husband is really good as well. Please continue
Date: 07/16/2015 10:52 pm Title: Blurring Lines
Drama building up!
Date: 07/16/2015 11:04 am Title: Allegiance
Forcing reviews! That's just not fair! I only found your story yesterday!
Needless to say, I'm enjoying it..
Date: 07/16/2015 01:32 am Title: Allegiance
You have me anxious about HG's relationship with Ron and also her polyjuice identiy passing at the ball.
Date: 07/16/2015 01:24 am Title: Kindred, Broken Spirits
not too mushy. I like that he's thawing out.
Date: 07/12/2015 04:44 am Title: Reluctant Paramours
Loving this.
Date: 05/25/2015 12:57 pm Title: Allegiance
Glad to read another update. I love the developing relationship between Severus and Hermione. Looking forward to reading about the Malfoy Ball.
Date: 05/16/2015 03:35 pm Title: Kindred, Broken Spirits
Wonderful story! I do hope you continue. I'm anxious to see how it all turns out.
Date: 04/10/2015 10:28 pm Title: Kindred, Broken Spirits
Is this it? No no no....more please. The characters were developed so well.....
Date: 02/21/2015 03:17 am Title: Kindred, Broken Spirits
Beautiful. A masterpiece.
Date: 01/05/2015 10:55 am Title: Getting Closer
Loving it!
thank you
Date: 01/01/2015 02:23 pm Title: Reluctant Paramours
Will you be continuing this story? I've been waiting and waiting for a new chapter...this story is so awesome!!
Date: 10/14/2014 02:22 am Title: Blurring Lines
Poor Ron!!
Im loving your fic!!
Date: 09/23/2014 11:50 am Title: Kindred, Broken Spirits
Please update soon. Never thought I see the day when Hermione willing lead Ron on like this but it's interesting reading. It's definitely going to blow up in her face. And shouldn't Ron be getting a decree to marry too? He's pure blood? Then things would definitely be a drama fest. And Snape and Mione finally finding some common ground nice.