[Report This]Date: 04/07/2011 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 12
Dang! You just know those pictures are going to come back and haunt Hermione at a later date. Whew, I can't wait to see what happens next. Yes, no doubt, Severus is going to be hurt. Wondering if he'll brood, nursing his hurt or go after what he wants? Enjoying your story!
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2010 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 12
I agree with Celia Equus, i've read her stories(which i love) and she has had horrid comments :(
I like Kingsley but i'd love to see her back with severus somehow. I hope you continue with your story, i think its wonderful and you shouldn't listen to those ignorant people who believe that they should attack other people's work.
This is your story not theirs, if they don't like it than they can go and write their own unimaginative stories. :)
please continue with your work.
Date: 07/16/2010 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow, that note at the end of the chapter sure made me suspect that there were some flamers.
I am not one of them.
However, I do strongly disapprove of what Hermione is doing. Having sex with, or really, let's call it what it is-- fucking random guys is just not the answer. Yeah, Ron was a prat and yes, she deserves better. But to make out with (and start what looks to be a physically serious relationship with) Snape and then to go off to sleep with Kingsley? While I would never say she can't-- she can do whatever she wants-- well, she shouldn't. She is only setting herself up to be hurt.
I am interested to see where you're going to take this, though I wish you could somehow reconcile this Hermione with canon Hermione, who, I think, would be more introspective about what had happened and less likely to go take her newly single status for a ride around town.
Date: 06/17/2010 02:04 am Title: Words
Interesting story so far, I don't mind seeing Ron as a bad guy. :)