Reviews For Broken Dreams
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Reviewer: susden Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2013 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Hello,

To my delight, the search to find this lovely tale again was succesful, and it was so kind of you to update it so swiftly.

To other readers, this intriguing tale is also on FFnet.

 and  includes 28 chapters.   Delight, delight.

Reviewer: susden Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2013 12:56 am Title: Chapter 4

 It is very well told, full of atmosphere and emotion. I like the hesitant way they move into each other's life.  and the deft description of  the pleasing scent

Do , please, keep writing more of this tale.

  It was  hurtful, the way they mock Luna. She has more clear sight and native intelligence  about other people's inner feelings than most people. Odd, that her 'friends' can't see this, and  hold her in higher esteem..... That , to me. nullifies Ginny's drive, and Hermione's bookish intelligence. Perhaps if she told them off , roundly, they would be more kind-hearted towards her.    She learnt her odd theories from her father, who doesn't really have time for her, and she is lonely.   True friends would be understanding , and teach her gently how to be more adept socially, Not gang together and  belittle her

It is  well-told of you, giving depth to the   simple descriptions  of H. and G.:  Human frailty and  Cattiness,pettiness,, but  I feel very sorry for Luna. if this is the best Hogwarts can offer, and where is there any awareness coming from  Her Head oif House?  Is Snape the only clear-sighted teacher?

 

Reviewer: CRMediaGal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I didn't put a rating! Sorry!

Reviewer: CRMediaGal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2012 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hopping over here to pop your review cherry, hahaha! ;) Reading parts of this again and lovin' it just as much as the first time! 

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