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Reviewer: susden Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2014 12:09 am Title: Hermione's Final Frontier

 Oh. dear Mrlin. in pink boxers.

This was.... like being in an odd ..read..the.. words.. it is a life lesson...state.   you have a truely inventive way of portraying these two in their passionate dance.

Won't you please keep on writing fanfics? Talent, you have. I sound like Yoda. 

 Good night.

 it is very late , but the lesson filled me with delight



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind review! :) *blushes* I'm glad you enjoyed reading my fic. I always thought it would be more realistic to have Hermione and Severus NOT fall head over heels with each other just because they had sex. To my understanding, they both have trust issues.

By the way, there's a third part to this series, "Embracing My Very Own Darkness". :) It's a dark fic but also quite realistic and...smutty, of course. ;) Oh, and Lucius Malfoy will be on it, too. 

Thanks again and good night! 

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Date: 03/26/2014 11:48 pm Title: Did I Say Anything About Homework?

 I can't believe this doesn't have any reviews. It is ' anatomically correct... as a not-Ken doll* (Dogma , ah metatron- ) tender, honest, funny, her banana practising- how I understand her .. and tho' your Snape is more starkly un-tender than mine, your brief glimpse of his sadness at her request,  later on, to make her hate him, you have caught his passion , clear. sighted intelligence, loneliness, need for closeness, however strangely the question is put, and her brilliance, studiousness, and feeling of seeing in Severus a kindred spirit. Two passionate loners, haughty, yet fiery-tempered.. Bravo, bravo, it is the elemental human existence, we are alone, and seek a pair of warm arms and understanding in anothers eyes, mind and heart to light up our Life in this school, this cave of darkness, that, Mr. Plato , I do not think is only a shadow of the real life outside it.

Well written , well- written.  Do . please , write more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing my story!^^ Yeah, well, I have no freaking idea why it's so hard to get reviews here; the counter tells me that PPL has been read well over one thounsand of times up to now but nobody seems to care enough to leave a review. -.- So, double thanks to you for taking the time and doing so! :D 

I'm very happy that you enjoy the portrayal of my version of Snape and Hermione; I think with the two of them everything hasty and overly lovey-dovey would be a bit of a farce since I regard especially Snape a rather troubled person with several serious issues and a very dark past that still haunts him. Hermione, however, proves to be a good cure. ;) But just as with everything else, even the best cures need time to be effective, so there's a sequel to PPL. ;) 

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Date: 08/06/2013 12:06 pm Title: Disgraceful Downfall?

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