Date: 06/27/2013 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 49
Wonderful! My favorite part of this was that you really told so many stories. It was awesome seeing the way everyone's story played out. Also - mortar and pestle - the moartar is the bowl and the pestle is the thing you use to grind stuff up. A few chapters back Severus poured something from the pestle.... that's not possible. lol. However, you did a wonderful job with this story, and I enjoyed every minute of it even though it was unfinished. I'm so glad I decided to read it. Thank you again for all of your hard work. I hope you finish this some day!
Author's Response: Drat. I do know what a mortar and pestle are, can't believe I goofed that one up! LOL I will have to go back and fix it. I keep meaning to finish this story one of these days. I really do. Glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2012 10:01 pm Title: Vindictive
Very good. Would like to see the ending.
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2012 10:01 pm Title: Vindictive
Very good. Would like to see the ending.
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2012 10:00 pm Title: Vindictive
Very good. Would like to see the ending.
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2012 10:00 pm Title: Vindictive
Very good. Would like to see the ending.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2010 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Bait
I love this story, too bad that it isn't finished. Is there a chance that the last chapters will be posted one day?
Date: 10/09/2008 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Bait
Uau this story is amazing!I really enjoyed what i read so far!Keep up with this!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/29/2008 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Bait
One of my most favorite stories! please never quit till it's done! we can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2008 03:46 am Title: Vindictive
wow! i had read the first 46 chapters on ashwinder and just about died when i thought i would never get to read more of this great story. i pulls me in and leaves me wanting more and more. please never quit this story.
Date: 02/07/2008 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Bait
nice story. It was much better than the mindless fluff u can find on this site.
Date: 01/14/2008 03:49 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bait
this story is great!!! i found it yesterday and i've already read the 48 chapters...
i can't wait for the update.
Date: 12/06/2007 05:14 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bait
Do you know that apathia in Greek means "feeling nothing" or - as the dictionary says- impassivity..
Author's Response: why yes, I did. (insert evil snicker here) Don't you think its a perfect Snape family name? (blinks innocently)
[Report This]Date: 12/04/2007 12:43 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bait
Yay! I'm quite happy to see an update even if it's short *cough*cough*
I like Sabine's quick reestimation of the Order's abilities. I do hope they have something going for them...
[Report This]Date: 12/02/2007 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 48 - Bait
Wahooooooooo! A new chapter!!!!! Please please please keep it up. Have been waiting awhile to see where this will go. Have loved it all!
Author's Response: My humblest apologies for the long delay. Between RL, toddler, writing for filthy lucre, and the like, it has been far too long.
[Report This]Date: 10/27/2007 05:46 am Title: Chapter 47
I enjoy reading a well written SS/HG story, and this one is excellent! Well rounded and written in a believable manner. It would be great to see a new update and a final ending
Date: 09/02/2007 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 19
I love this line! “Our fate is never decided until the very last moment, Hermione, remember that. You constantly choose your destiny in every thing you do and in every word you speak. It can be changed at any moment by simply choosing differently.”
Author's Response: Thank you, you have been giving me some wonderful reviews. :) This story is NOT abandoned. I hit a bad case of writer's block, but I have been fighting through it. I have five pages done for the next chapter and am wrestling my demons to the ground. LOL Hopefully I will have another chapter up soon.
Date: 09/02/2007 08:16 pm Title: Inhale
Great line: "Harry winced and Hermione could see the exact moment that his unreasoning dislike for the Professor died in his heart. He might never be Severus’ biggest fan, but he would also never be able to despise him utterly ever again, not after glimpsing the depths of pain that lurked in the other man’s heart."
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2007 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 47
This is a very entertaining story with lots of subplots. I like it that Severus and Hermione have stayed in character throughout. I notice that this hasn't been updated in a while -- has it been abandoned?
Date: 08/31/2007 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 19
Nice plot element with Severus as the Seer.
Date: 08/31/2007 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 13
The painfulness of the wedding feast was well done -- I cringed at how awkward it was.
And a spell to induce passion in the new couple, and Hermione's anger at it was great!
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2007 11:18 am Title: Chapter 8
Snape's assessment of himself is spot on! I actually think there's hope where there is such honesty.
Date: 08/31/2007 10:49 am Title: Chapter 4
This is a great beginning. It's also one of the few Marriage Law Challenge fics that I have read that, so far, keeps everyone in character. Any marriage between Rowling's Snape and Granger would start out as a marriage in name only.
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 01:34 am Title: Chapter 47
This is such an amazing story! I hope to read more soon. I especially enjoy Sabine and Sarit, both unique and 'dastardly' in their own ways. Such wonderful, original characters.
[Report This]Date: 07/12/2007 04:44 am Title: Chapter 47
I really love this story. I can't wait until Severus meets his child. Update soon!
Date: 04/10/2007 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 47
I absolutely love this story! The part that has made me laugh the most so far is when Hermione dumped the punch on Severus' father. I also enjoyed the reference to Rincewind's hat and Hermione's speculation as to what messages Crookshanks was trying to send the baby. You must be a cat person.
Author's Response: How did you know? LOL I am also glad that you got the Pratchett reference, I have had several people ask me what the hat was about.