[Report This]Date: 01/07/2015 09:08 am Title: The Mission Begins
I love reading your stories. Thank you so much x
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2013 02:20 pm Title: Death and Betrayal
That's a very interesting beginning!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. It seems that I wrote this a lifetime ago!
Love Sonia
[Report This]Date: 06/14/2010 08:33 pm Title: New Beginnings
Wow. That was quite a ride. If you ever do a sequel, it could be even a short story catching us up on what Tolmie and the rest are doing. You have created some wonderful characters.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review. I am thinking about the sequel, but I have to finish my other story first as I am way to busy to have more than one story running at a time.
Love Sonia :)
Date: 06/12/2010 02:17 am Title: Cornelius' Surprise
I know this is not a brand new story, but for a first, it is excellent.If it were not a first, it still would be excellent.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Reading through bits and pieces of it the other day made me cringe.
Love Sonia :)
Date: 06/09/2010 08:48 pm Title: Hermione Looses Her Magic
It is in the title of chapter 13. I am forging ahead!
Author's Response: Thank you...
Date: 06/09/2010 11:53 am Title: Hermione Looses Her Magic
I am still sneaking in a chapter now and then. I did want to mention that Hermione "loses" her magic instead of "looses" it (unless she is turning it loose on someone!).
Author's Response: Thanks babe. In what chapter was that?
love Sonia :)
Date: 06/07/2010 02:49 am Title: The Aftermath
I actually like shorter chapters. That way, I can take some time to read one or two when I probably should be doing something else-no real guilt that way!
Author's Response: Thanks babe! I hope you enjoy my first story.
Love Sonia :)
Date: 06/30/2009 11:08 am Title: New Beginnings
It's very good story, but ending was a little too short. What happened to Tolmie, Sirius, Remus, Ginny? This four person is missing in you end and just one sentence about them would be ok... Brilliant story. One of the best and, dare I say, most suprisingly fanfics I ever read! Good job! :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I left it open on purpose in case I wanted to come back and write a sequel.
Thank you so very much for reviewing each-and-every chapter.
Love Sonia :)
Date: 06/30/2009 10:01 am Title: All Wards Are Down
That was good- not sex in first moment, but comfort and realase in emotions. Too bad that Harry and Ron couldn't see their friend happy.
Date: 06/30/2009 09:44 am Title: The Death of a Dark Wizard
Wow... You know, when I was reading all J.K.Rowling books I was glad that in magic world, in time of war there was no rape. And I still belive that rape is not one of thing in magic world... Little childlish and naive but that makes me calm.
Date: 06/30/2009 09:23 am Title: Voldemort’s Return
Ohoho! Voldie in Fudge's body?! THAT was shock! And it's your first fanfic?! You have a REAL talent!
Date: 06/30/2009 09:03 am Title: The Dark Mark
Oh, God. Now what?! Voldie came back?! Or... I just don't have a slighty idea! xD I ove surprises and you are master in this ;)
Date: 06/30/2009 08:50 am Title: The Mission Begins
Hmmm... But what about this link? Is that about that he's seeing her everywhere, they're like one in two bodies? Or what? Or maybe it was said but I miss it somewhat (or don't understand- my English sucks).
Date: 06/30/2009 08:40 am Title: Tolmie’s Return
Tolmie is acting strange, I don't know why I think that. About why Severus have this dreams... I suppose that he think about her like she's something special, which he can't loose. He was looking after her for months and now, when he already have her she may die?
Date: 06/30/2009 08:16 am Title: The Viewing of Andrew Poles’ Memories
I just love Snape in this chapter! He's so... caring? I just don't have a word for this. Poor Andrew, he didn't want to be a part of this, so Albus shouldn't go with him.
Date: 06/30/2009 08:03 am Title: Andrew’s Mind
I'm not sure that Dumbledore knew what his doing with Andrew might take on effect. That's a good chapter, but I'm curious about what Snape is going to say to Albus.
Date: 06/30/2009 07:55 am Title: Dr Lopes and the Wizards
I don't know why but I really though that Andrew has something with magic world (from moment when he was having this dream about Hermione). But that's really suprise, I didn't expected you'll REALLY do this :D
Date: 06/30/2009 07:49 am Title: The Lioness in the Devil’s Lair
Not only bastard, but also sick pervert! >:[ Ghhh... Cornelius will be really in big danger when Snape will find him >:)
Date: 06/30/2009 07:41 am Title: Calling Miss Granger
Bastard- both Cornelius and Albus. Poor Ginny- she lost her family and her friend is probably in grave danger. Sirius is still and idiot and good- I don't like him xD
Date: 06/30/2009 07:32 am Title: The Order
I hope my reviews aren't annoying? I have a habit to review if something stick in my mind xD Sirius is like big kid- always jumping to conclusions and head in clouds, and he just LOVE to overreact.
Author's Response: No darl, not at all.
Love Sonia :)
Date: 06/30/2009 07:19 am Title: Cornelius’ Duplicity
I think that's somewhat normal in psychological way. If you're in danger and someone is helping you- you're thinking about this person as your knight on the white horse, even if he was your enemy. And I know why in this challenge Snape must be first person to see her.
Date: 06/30/2009 07:11 am Title: Hermione’s Anguish
xD Tolmie must have a REAL fun from Severus! :D
Date: 06/30/2009 06:48 am Title: Severus' Realization
I think you just like number 12 xD About Tolmie- I want him to like Hermione, no just care about Snape, but like her.
Date: 06/30/2009 06:39 am Title: The Final Battle Retold
Poor Minerva- she was so happy that Hermione is alive and that kind of schock... Good tale and I really admire you- you could kill people we like, I don't have so much courage to do that in any of my fanfic's.
Author's Response: I really killed off the characters that I don't really care for. Not that I don't like Harry, but you know what I mean. I like both Bill and Charlie, and the twins, Ginny is okay too. Those are the only Weasley's that I can stomach. Can't stand Hagrid or Dobby.
Love Sonia :)
Date: 06/30/2009 06:23 am Title: Empathy
Finn gots what he deserved. Of course, he was just making orders, but he liked that and he liked to bully his patients. Poor Hermione- one more time she must fell pain of loosing all her friends.