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Reviewer: Saguaro Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2008 - 09:53 pm Title: Surrender

Great start. Personally I have trouble with a character or person talking about him or herself in the third person. It's distracting and takes away from the feelings of that character. But that's just me.

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