Date: Aug 02, 2008 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lost Souls
Thank you for a well written story.
I can't say that I understand their kind of relationship - the need to totaly dominate someone and to lose oneself to another's wants and desires completely but I could see they had tender feelings for each other.
The 'ghost' was a surprise but it led to a wonderful conclusion.
Date: Jul 31, 2008 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 4: A Deepening Mystery
Hurry back and give us more. I want to know more about Melanie and the 'mistake' that was made.
Date: Jul 28, 2008 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 3: Trapped
Come back quick, I need more!




[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2008 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter 2: The Fateful Cruise (continued)
Another wonderful story!!! So beautifully written. I don't think you left a single detail out. Of course, though, you leave the reader wanting more... again. No fair.
Date: Jul 25, 2008 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Fateful Cruise (continued)
Looking forward to more.