Date: 06/11/2008 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, I'm the first to review???
I can't believe, it such a good story and no review's what a pity!
I like the way you brought wiccan ellements into the story (I'm wicca so...)
The only negative would be that your story is a bit hard to read because of your problems with symbols such as "" and ' ! (don't know their full names in English)
Was your story betated ?(is that corectly spelled??!!)