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Reviewer: snapesflower Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2020 07:51 am Title: Chapter 15

I like your story so far. Its really good. But you do neex to take a breath, re-read what you've written, and correct your errors so that the story is easier to read. I've been writing many years and I still have to clean up my punctuation and edit my work. Its worth the extra time. Good work.

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