Reviewer: lovelymia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/2012 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Making Contact

oh i loved this story already

Reviewer: Lady S Snape Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2012 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: Making Contact

oh my...

Reviewer: mhgood Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2010 11:35 pm Title: Epilogue

Lovely story!  I enjoyed reading it very much--thank you so much for coming up with your inventive plot and for writing this huge epic.  Your writing style is brilliant, and your charactarisations are spot on.

Reviewer: deejay Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2010 04:58 pm Title: Epilogue

I recently found this story while browsing the WIKTT Archives. I have truly enjoyed it. I laughed when, even though DH had not been published, you found good reason to involve a tent!

Reviewer: throwmyfaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2009 01:09 am Title: Epilogue

I gotta admit, this is really good. I'll be bone honest and say I've read others I love a lot more, but you kept my attention the entire way. I loved the way you did the characters, especially Tonks cackling, and there was just the right balance between sickly sweet and flaming rows. (Harry Potter is not Harry Potter without a flaming row every few minutes.) 

All in all, a job well done. 

 

Also, I like, never review. So sorry if this sucks. 

Reviewer: Snape Obsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2009 04:23 pm Title: Epilogue

This story is one of the best fanfiction I've read, and I've read a lot. The only thing I would have changed would have been to have the baby be a boy named Sebastian.

Reviewer: Camilla Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2008 07:52 am Title: Epilogue

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Wow.

Fantastic.

I've been reading this story for the last three days (I started out reading the first four chapters before I checked how long it'd be, and that was probably good because I hardly ever read anything this long online).

This plot ties things in so very nicely. I must say I like it better than JKR's version, because this used things she had already presented, instead of coming up with three thousand info dumps and easy ways out during the last book. The spell to end Voldemort, which was something along the lines of what I always had in mind for his demise, was also much more sensible than that Special Wand she presented.

Though there have been a few spelling mistakes (some chapters more than others), it hasn't been enough to distract from the lovely story. The progression of Hermione and Snape's relationship was fantastic, and they were in character pretty much the whole time. I loved that you developed Hermione's character to a real grown-up (as well as Harry's), instead of having them act like children still. Ron's petulance and inability to accept certain things was also very much in character, while still keeping him likeable.

The funny thing is that your version is also more convincing as far as the Harry/Ginny relationship goes - a relationship I loathe in the books, but which you have managed to get across even though they're far from the main subject in this fic.

I thought the Prince Manor would actually be Dumbeledore's Manor which he'd left behind - the names of the house elves seemed to point that way :) But the fic over all was surprising and has kept me clicking on the next chapter all the time, even though I should have gone to bed.

So, over all, a fantastically wonderful fic. I'm not sure I'll read it again, because it was so long, but I'm very certain I'll keep thinking of it and come back to it as an example of wonderful writing.

So, great job.

Cam
(bananacosmicgirl@hotmail.com)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed my story--I'm blushing! Honestly, I worked very hard to keep the characters in character as much as possible and I love hearing that I managed it pretty well while still entertaining the readers. And I nearly made Prince Manor just the little cottage that Severus received form Dumbledore, it was one a very serious possibility when I wrote Twinkie into the story. By the time the manor house came along, of course I had decided to go the other direction, but it was so fun to come up with junk food for names that I couldn't stop. lol

I'm still amazed at how easy it was to write the story, with all the things we knew were supposed to happen in DH to use as guides. I wish my salable novels were so easy to plot. lol

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2008 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 33:Adulthood Acknowledged

O wow you did get a lot of reviews in the long run, but I really do like this fic.

Reviewer: Cruel-Crush Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2008 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 11: Softer than Indifference

I know this is going to sound utterly stupid but I swear this story is exactly like the best milk and dark Chocolate :D
yum :)

lovin it!

Reviewer: Nadia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2007 01:34 pm Title: Epilogue

Fantastic story. One of the better in this fandom. I certainly would enjoy reading more of your work.

Author's Response: Keep an eye out, in February or March I'll probably start posting up another, and I've begun playing with a third one today, though don't count on either being anywhere near as long as this one. lol

Reviewer: merlin101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2007 02:06 pm Title: Epilogue

This was a great read. I have already started re-reading it.

Reviewer: tobydog Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2007 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 49: Coming Clean and Arranging a Trial

I just found your completed story and have been reading for two days now. It's wonderful! There are a couple of things I keep looking for, though -- maybe they'll be answered in the next couple of chapters.... what happened to the Felix Felicis? Who betrayed the Order and told Snake Face what was going on? Can't wait to finish the last chapters!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. I admit, I think I forgot to mention that the Felix Felicis got passed around at the meeting before the battle began. I'll have to add a sentence or two about that in my rewrite. I was writing so fast and furious to finish this story before DH came out I forgot to include a couple things I had originally intended to do at the end.