[Report This]Date: 02/02/2011 09:41 am Title: Chapter 1
a very enjoyable tale,I way prefer lucius to Severus anyday of the week.but its a shame she cheated on him.the last chapter was very bittersweet to read.on the whole a good story ~ well done.
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2008 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
What the heck would have caused Hermione to have cheated on Severus? Don't get me wrong, I lust after Lucius too? *SMIRK* *LEER* *WEG* ;-)
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bravo! The ending was very sad indeed. Looking forward to your next piece!
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2007 08:07 am Title: Chapter 10
I am accepting the story, but I'm a little lost. When did Hermione have the baby and why did they name it Kira? When did Draco and Gabby have time to come together. Did they leave Kira behind while on their honeymoon? Sorry, just need some varification. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 11/04/2007 08:35 am Title: Chapter 8
Ok, now this is just getting depressing! At this rate I'm going to have to stop reading. Hermione is coming off as a cold hearted B****. Alright, I'll wait to see the next chapter, but someone better do something really nice for Severus or I'm through. LOL
[Report This]Date: 11/04/2007 04:42 am Title: Chapter 8
He had a broken heart of course! There cannot be any kind of happy ending for Severus can there? **sigh**
Author's Response: WELL....... not in this story, unfortunately. you're gonna hate chapter 10. i know i did! *cries for Severus with his broken heart*
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2007 08:21 am Title: Chapter 7
I need the next chapter... now. Right now!! Please? Okay?!?
Author's Response: okay, wish granted!
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2007 10:43 am Title: Chapter 7
I am so not liking how this is going! I am enjoying the story, but this is really starting to suck for poor Severus. By the way, my vote is for Amber for the baby. Not that my vote counts, but there are too many Jasmine's. Waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: yeah, it does suck for him... which makes me sad. but anywho, just to let you know, the baby is named neither Amber nor Jasmine. it's kinda... way off... from those two names... which really makes me wonder how they agreed on it... but anywho. btw, i voted for Amber as well.
[Report This]Date: 10/23/2007 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
What?! I don't know about this. You need to fill me in on what happened? What is Severus thinking? Why did he disappear for 3 months? For someone who is supposed to be brilliant didn't 'Mione think that Severus might not want to play daddy to someone else's kid? I don't know about this chapter felt a little too rushed...but I'm still intrigued about what will happen next...
Author's Response: he disappeared for three months cuz he didn't want to see hermione or lucius... but i think you figgered that one out. and i think hermione just didn't want to believe it of Severus. i think you might like this next chapter, whenever i get it up.
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2007 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
This story just gets better and better! What was 'Mione thinking staying at the house after knowing Severus was back? I think the Draco bit was a little much as no man would ever let anyone else stay in their house who tried to rape their woman... Draco should have a very cruel punishment for his actions. Looking forward to reading it!
Author's Response: it does, doesn't it? mmm....... anywho, i think you're right. but you know what's funny? i don't really remember what happens... i'll have to go back and read it. but, it's great to have you as such a faithful reader! thanks bunches!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2007 08:14 am Title: Chapter 5
Ok, that is soooo wrong to just end it without the reader knowing who. Wrong, wrong, wrong! Now hurry up and tell us who. hehe
Author's Response: lol, yeah. but you can't blame me. i was mad at Jennifer when she was writing this and i came to this part. you'll find out soon enough, though.
[Report This]Date: 09/27/2007 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow that story gets even more complex. so now we are introducing victor krum into the mix...and he obviously still has feelings for 'mione, as does Draco...ohh I am filled with anticipation for all the confrontations to follow....sorry i haven't checked in a while...i'm a high school math teacher and school has been crazy! can't wait to read the next installments! is Lucius going to die? i have a feeling severus will kill him or at least maim him in the next chapter ...
Author's Response: it does get quite a bit more complex. i thank you sincerely for being a faithful reader! and school has been crazy for me as well... lol. thanks for reviewing again!
p.s. i'm not saying much about the whole Lucius/Severus confrontation, you'll just have to find out. XD
[Report This]Date: 09/25/2007 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I can not believe that Hermione would ruin a marriage to Severus to be with Malfoy. What is she thinking????
Author's Response: that's precisely what i was thinking when i was reading it as my friend was writing it. i, personally, wouldn't do that. lol.
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2007 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
EXCELLENT!!!!
I do look forward to reading more of this great story...
Author's Response: thank you very much! i'll put up the next chapter some time soon.
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
What?! This story is crazy!!!! Very wild premise but definitely intriguing. Why would anyone, lest of all Hermione, cheat on sexy Severus...I need to understand! Can I see the next chapter?
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing. i told my friend what your review said, and she said that she agreed.