Date: 12/09/2007 05:48 am Title: Chapter 2
Hey :),
well the plot development was quite fast so fat, but your story seems to be very promising nevertheless!
Author's Response: This story will have a lot of action. Since it is a story about war mostly from Hermione's p.o.v. it will have fast and slow chapters. I already have six chapters written and waiting for my beta and I am already seeing a trend for action and reaction chapters. I hope you will stick with me and enjoy the story!
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2007 08:58 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh NO!!!!!!! An you just left us hanging. Evil,evil writer!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but this is a very long story so it is inevitable not to have at least some evil cliffies. Take heart, I have five chapters written, number three is with my beta. I won't leave you hanging long. Thank you for the review, I hope you liked the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2007 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 Back to School
Nice start! I too am wondering what Crabbe is up to. Looking forward to more.
Ps. From an Air Force brat to a Marine Brat, welcome to the HP fan fiction. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review! I am so happy you are enjoying my story so far and I hope you will continue to do so. I have this story posted on several sites and you are the first to comment on the Marines so you win Chocolate Frogs! The story's title does have two meanings and you were the first to guess. My second chapter is with my beta, so it won't be too long.
~sinbad~