[Report This]Date: 09/03/2008 05:20 pm Title: The Waiting Is Over
I loved this story!
You did another work called 'For Your Pleasure' (I think) has it ever been finished? If so can you tell me where to find it. Thanks....
Date: 07/03/2008 07:43 am Title: Great Plans
I'm glad your "one-shot" grew to so many chapters. I enjoyed your story. Here's to ever-increasing plot bunnies!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2008 06:08 pm Title: The Waiting Is Over
I am very, very sorry that you cannot see this, or hear it for that matter; I am dancing and singing. I can, however, let you read my little song I have composed, though you will have to make up the tune yourself. Here goes:
Severus.. He fell in luuuurve with Hermione! But not real love! No! He wanted a WIFE, yeaaahaaarh...
But then he fell in love! MPFH! And there was all these misunderstandings! WOHOOO, misunderstandings...
AND THEN THEY FELL IN LOVE! UHYEAH! And I'm a really terrible songwriter/-singer
WOOOHOOO... Severus had Great Plans! Yeahyeah, by LariLee! Umpf!
(and then, a really high note, that can shatter glass, just because I really like high notes that shatter glass... Except the whole shattering of the glass... Um... Forget it, there is just a very high, glass-shattering, probably misplaced note)
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2007 09:56 am Title: The Waiting Is Over
Wonderful story, definately a favorite. I hope to come across it again some day, and read it again.
Good luck with the other plot bunnies. Happy writing,
MissBe
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2007 07:30 am Title: Protecting Her
I normally don't revew for finished works until the end, but I just couldn't resist enlightening you to some really well written parts.
he he he, "... Listen to your head rattle", classic Snape. "Caress the dark..." *shudders* thats one sexy Snape! WOW!
You're really doing well with a Severus that's on the line. Seducing a student, and being on the straight and narrow... very hard to do without making one seem like a pedophile or too "good" for the part he plays. Very well done. Looking forward to the rest of your story.
Happy writing,
MissBe
[Report This]Date: 11/14/2007 07:55 am Title: The Waiting Is Over
Nice story
Date: 09/03/2007 03:19 pm Title: The Waiting Is Over
Wow what a fic your plot bunnies are brilliant as is this story. Sevvey has a heart sweet. Please keep on writting great fics and I'll read em.
~Weezle~
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2007 09:53 pm Title: The Waiting Is Over
A very good story. A story doesn't have to be rated higher than PG to be good and to hold the interest. There is no reason you should rate your stories higher than -you- think yhey should be. After all, you are the author.
[Report This]Date: 01/03/2007 07:26 pm Title: The Waiting Is Over
Enjoyable story.