Reviews For Dark Clouds
Reviewer: Maria Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2011 04:56 pm Title: One-shot
Author's Response: Oh, that's funny. I do believe that the intention of this story, for it is a fictional tale, was not to accurately portray relationships, but to merely be entertaining enough for people to read. Not that I'm an expert on relationships (nor are you going by the review you left) but not every person reacts to situations the same way. As far as anyone knows, there is potential for any number of things to occur when a person finds their partner has cheated on them. Who says she can't be in the mood to sleep with someone after finding her husband cheating? Who says she can't have revenge on that by taking comfort with another? Also... please note that this story was written 3 years ago now. The writing is terrible. Poor review Maria. When you've written a fan fiction yourself, come back and let me know how easy you found it to come up with something interesting to write and entertain others.
Date: 09/19/2011 04:56 pm Title: One-shot
Even if she was planning to cheat that evening, finding her husband in bed with someone else wouldn't put her in the mood. And if you want her to be IC, then a confrontation would have occurred and she would have left Grimmauld that evening.
I don't buy this and I have to seriously question your age. I suspect you're quite young and have no experience with serious relationships.
Good writing but poor story.
Author's Response: Oh, that's funny. I do believe that the intention of this story, for it is a fictional tale, was not to accurately portray relationships, but to merely be entertaining enough for people to read. Not that I'm an expert on relationships (nor are you going by the review you left) but not every person reacts to situations the same way. As far as anyone knows, there is potential for any number of things to occur when a person finds their partner has cheated on them. Who says she can't be in the mood to sleep with someone after finding her husband cheating? Who says she can't have revenge on that by taking comfort with another? Also... please note that this story was written 3 years ago now. The writing is terrible. Poor review Maria. When you've written a fan fiction yourself, come back and let me know how easy you found it to come up with something interesting to write and entertain others.