Date: 11/10/2020 08:23 pm Title: Epilogue
I don't know if you are keeping up with reviews here, but I enjoyed your story very much. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2017 08:23 pm Title: Prologue
Oh my god I am SO delighted to have found your story here. It is one I have read several times on Ashwinder over the years, and is without a doubt the most standout HG/SS and overall best HP fanfic I have ever read, and I am both a prolific reader and very picky!
Ashwinder has been offline for a while now and I thought your story was gone for good-and when I did finally fig it up here, I realised that it was pretty rude of me to have got so much joy from your story and never reviewed or said so-so THANK YOU.
Date: 01/21/2013 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Part 3
Go to Aswinder. This story is complete in 59 chapters! It is a classic.
Date: 11/28/2012 11:07 pm Title: Prologue
What a great story. I hope one day you'll find your muse again and finish it. I'd love to see the curator get got!
[Report This]Date: 01/09/2009 11:05 am Title: Chapter 12 - Part 3
o wow this was bloody amazing! one of the best i've read
[Report This]Date: 12/26/2008 02:20 am Title: Chapter 4 - part 2
OMG. This is by far the hottest chapter I have ever read in any fic EVER. I don't even smoke, and I need a cigarette.
[Report This]Date: 11/05/2008 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Part 3
Geez I fell in love with your story! o.O
This is really one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction that I ever read!
I'm putting you and your story in my favorites right now.
You better continue to write chapters! ;-)
Much love xxx
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Part 2
I so stoked--I found the website that this story is archived at http://www.obscurusbooks.org/html/Azrael_Geffen/Objects/index.html. So when I'm done reading, and reviewing the chapters posted here I'll go there to finish reading the story. ;-D
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Part 1
'I have, for the past year, been waiting on a full grammar beta of this story, as yet I have been unsuccessful in that endeavour and thus I have not uploaded the full story to Ashwinder. As it has been finished and posted at Whispers for quite a while I’ve decided to post it here anyway. It has been beta’d, but as with all beta jobs things were missed.'
Whispers <<==What is the addy of this archive? I would love to read the rest of this awesome story!
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Part 1
I forgot to make comment about the article in the Daily Prophet regarding Harry and Draco's relationship...bummer, I would be reluctant to go back to Hogwarts too. Poor honeys, Draco and Harry, to have to put up with the potential shit-storm that they will encounter at school, hey? ;-(
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Part 1
Mmm, lucky Hermione to wake up with studly specimen of manhood able to fulfill her needs. ;~D
Poor Lucius to be repeatedly raped by the Curator. I'm dying to see the vengence that Lucius' will inflect upon the sicko when he is returned to an active member of the living. I thought that it was extremely interesting that Lucius was able to visit Draco and Harry as they slept to warn them of the danger ahead, and demand that Harry protect Draco at all costs. That is true love of a parent for a child (brings tears to my eyes).
Whew, they have each met the terms of the contract and no longer have to worry about a lifetime of boils. Thank goodness that the contract wasn't so detailed specific as to list the names of their sexual partners, hey? LOL
::shakes head in disgust:: Argh, stubborn men, poor Draco freezing his cute ass off because Harry is reluctant to return to Hogwarts. At least they had sense enough to take time out to warm up and find a room for the night, even if Harry was inadvertently outted to his relatives by Draco--the little chit, LOL.
WTF--now the sicko Curator is going to fake attempt drown Lucius to get him to respond to him for jollies? Poor Lucius had better get rescued soon otherwise the poor man will go insane, inside of his shell of a body (which is already deteriorating away), from the tramatization of the repeated rapes, and now attempted drownings too. ;-(
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 03:40 am Title: Chapter 11 - Part 3
What the heck did Lupin say to Severus to get him all weirded out? I thought that it was fantastic the method that Hermione utilized to get his mind off of whatever was shutting him down.
Hmm, well Ron popped his cherry...too bad it was to the SlutBitchWhore!Angelina. It was in extreme bad taste the way that the 2-bit whore treated him afterwards.
Holy Mother of God, Moody should be brought up on charges of "crimes against humanity" for what he did to Draco, Vincent and whoever else too. Malicious Sadistic Sick F**K! ;-P
I love how Harry and Draco brought the New Year in with a bang, LOL.
OMG, don't you just adore a man that practices the art of foreplay? ;~D
I want to backhand the living bejesus out of Ron for the shit that he said to Harry and Draco! ;-P
Hurray! Severus and Hermione have given themselves to each other! ;~D
Aww, how sweet...I love how Harry and Draco came out of the parlor holding hands so that they wouldn't get separated. I'm so proud of Harry for not being afraid to ask his love, Draco, to dance with him to the slow dance and then to also kiss him right there on the dance floor. Fantastic!
Beautifully written.
[Report This]Date: 03/08/2008 02:45 am Title: Chapter 11 - Part 2
::big f**king grin:: '“I like your shirt.” Minerva slurred and then looking over the swarm of people that was Harry she added, “and I see you’ve dressed Potter as a slut.”
“I like my men a little sleazy,” Draco quipped and Minerva laughed heartily.
“To be honest darling, so do I.”' <=Too freaking funny--I love it! ;-D
Ron is such a jerk-off for being so relentless in his bad-mouthing of Draco, not to mention his calling Harry a 'fucking rent boy.' Good man Harry for sticking to his guns in regards to loyalty to Draco and dumping Ron's stupid ass as a friend when he is constantly showing one and all that he hasn't a clue on how to even begin to be a true friend.
::cackling:: I love Dumbledore dressing as a Death Eater, and Severus as Mephistopheles.
Ah geez, the Sleaze Queen Angelina pursues Ron even at the party...what a HO!
I was laughing so hard when I read about Draco being a "little House Elf liberationist" when he was three years old, by dressing 45 (forty-five) house elves to the dismay and frustration of his father, Lucius.
I think that it was complete shit the way that people behaved towards poor Draco at the party--they should be ashamed of themselves!
*SQUEE* OMG--I get the chills (the good kind) and my mouth starts to water when I read what Severus whispered to Hermione ontop of the North turret, "I want to fuck you." WoW! ::fans face and is dying to have Snape for herself:: *WINK-WINK-KNUDGE-KNUDGE-...* ;~D ARGH, who has the audacity to interrupt our two fave people from consumating their relationship?!
OMG--Moody was the sadistic bastard that scarred up Draco's body! What a sick F**K! Draco the poor sweetheart never did ANYTHING to have deserved such a thing to have been done to him! ;-(
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 11 - The Party
With the exception of the bit with Ron and Angelina, this chapter was pretty sexy. I love a man in eyeliner, and the description of how yummy Harry and Draco look in their leather pants, OH MY GOD, I'm drooling. *GIGGLE* ;~D
Hmm, Lucius and Ginny's moment sounds great...I would love to have him between my legs (envisioning the scene from "Romancing the Stone" in which the two main characters land after sliding down the side of a hill in mud). *WINK-WINK-KNUDGE-KNUDGE-...* *LEER* *WEG* *SMIRK* ;~D
Hip Hip Hurray...Draco finally told Harry that he loves him! Fantastic!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Part 4
Even though Lucius has been kissed by a Dementor and is in a vegetative state, it still takes balls the size of church bells to confess what Draco did, LOL.
I enjoy Severus and Hermione in bed being all cozy and talking about things and getting to know each other--too sweet. The dragon story was odd, but I got a kick out of reading about Aberforth's intimate relations with goats--too freaking funny, LOL. *SNICKER*
How cool is this bit from the story? '...Suddenly the air around him was filled with an incredible sound, like the beating of giant wings, gathering him up. Pulling him in towards the case and in his head he heard a voice, his fathers and yet not, crying out loud in agony.' I was totally freaked out when I read about Draco (while under the control of the Curator's Imperius curse) flying backwards and slamming into his father's case, then the case cracking and exploding leaving Lucius and Draco unscathed. Fantastic how this released Draco from the curse and allowed Lucius a brief period of lucidity to be able to warn Draco to run.
Bloody Brilliant and exciting and sexy--I love this story! ;~D
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Part 3
::dirty chuckle:: I love how Draco was tempted to ask Hermione if she wanted to participate in a threesome with Harry and himself. I really enjoyed Hermione's regret that she brought attention to herself and interrupted what would have been a f**king fantastic sex show. 'It was possibly the hottest thing she had ever seen and she had the guilty pleasure of feeling her clitoris engorge with blood.' <= freaking hot!
Angelina is a freaking skank for groping Ron in front of everybody.
I was impressed and touched by the gifts that Hermione received from Snape, Draco, and Harry. I was almost in tears from reading the card to Draco from his father.
I'm glad that Hermione finally got a chance to spend some time with Professor Snape and talk about her awful experience and get to cry too, you know?
I was absolutely thrilled upon reading Severus' declaration of love for Hermione at the end of the chapter...it's about time, LOL.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Part 2
AvengingAngel!Snape kicking the crap out of a VERY deserving P.O.S.-Scumbag!Krum--good!
Aww, how sweet was it to have Hermione waking up between those two yummy boys/men, hey? ;-)
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Part 1
Holy man, is Angelina a evil slut cow to blackmail Ron into doing Heroin. Stupid putz for not putting up more of a fight.
Thank God that Hermione made it to Malfoy Manor alive. Now for some medical attention. Too bad that Dumbledore wasn't able to get to Hermione's room fast enough to have prevented Viktor from escaping punishment.
'The rose bud beside his name was small and yellow and once again tinged with brown.' <--Sounds to me that Ron's wilting roses are due to his being in an unhealth relationship with Angelina. ;-(
'He looked over Hermione’s rose buds. A couple looked as though they had died and were dripping what could have been blood.' <--Dream Smasher Krum is here to attempt to kill any and all of Hermione's romantic hopes--darned jerk-off. ;-P
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Part 4
I'm glad things are going so swimmingly for Harry and Draco. ;~D
Oh My God! Poor, poor Hermione--I hope to God that she is able to get someone's attention to get medical help at Malfoy Manor before dies, you know? ;-(
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Part 3
I can't wait to see how Hermione's seduction of Severus turns out. *WINK-WINK-KNUDGE-KNUDGE-...* *LEER* *WEG* *SMIRK*
I hope that Harry accompanies Draco to the Death Eater Exhibit.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 9 - part 2
I love Hermione trying to seduce Severus. I thought that it was great that he kept having the thought going through his head to pick her up, take her to bed, and have his merry way with her--Hubba-Hubba! *LEER* *SMIRK* *WEG* ;~D
Bummer about Dumbledore interrupting them and taking the wind out of Severus' sails. ;-P
I love the letters that they sent to each other to get to know each other better. I especially enjoyed Severus' poem--it was perfect!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 9 - part 1
Ron is such a jerk! I was thrilled that Harry was defending Draco in public, even though Draco wasn't there for it. Good for Hermione, to have returned the flowers from Viktor...nip any of his ambitions in the bud (pun intended, LOL). Minerva can be a thorn in the side with her teasing Severus, hey, LOL.
Great Draco/Harry smut and loving moment.
Well done--keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 8 - part 2
*SQUEE* OMG, I love Severus and Hermione's tryst in the forest! ;~D
Too bad they were interrupted by Dumbledore, ugh! ;-(
YUCK, Viktor copping a feel. ::suddering with the creepy-crawlies:: ;-P
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 11:55 am Title: Chapter 8
Damn, poor Severus, losing a friend in Lily like that, especially when he was told that she would be spared. ;-(
I'm not sure that having dinner with Viktor is such a good idea. It might make his twisted, little, pumpkin head get jumbled ideas about the two of them, you know?
Harry has got to learn to shut the hell up about Draco's family, especially if he wants things to work out at all.
ARGH, the sick S.O.B. of a curator having a quickie with Lucius before opening the museum's door--I hope that Lucius comes back for revenge and cuts his John-Thomas off...with a spoon!
'A son, a man and he looked just like him. Direct bloodline. An old bloodline at that. Two of a kind. The Curators macabre collectors mind began to reel. A matching set.' <--Oh man, poor Draco, he wants to have you too--run, hide! ::shudders in revulsion::
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2008 04:35 am Title: Chapter 8
I was chuckling when I read about Draco's baby spit on Lucius' shoulder. I felt so sad for Severus when presented with Lily's body, the poor guy. I was giggling when Lucius changed Harry's poopy diaper, what a great daddy type person he can be, hey? ;-D
I'll review more on this chapter later...I'm falling asleep, too tired, ugh. LOL