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Reviewer: mkwiant Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2013 06:19 pm Title: The End of an Era

Great story!  Thank you so much for writing!

Reviewer: TheLionsPaleProtector Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2012 11:50 pm Title: Setting The Scene

Amazing so far!!! /intriguing, good writing, and bonus points for addin in my other fav. pairing, HP/DM!!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Jocelyn25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2011 05:54 am Title: The End of an Era

Amazing story, glad I found this again. Any chance for a sequel? Would love to read it, your dialogues are fantastic, witty and still *real* Respect. Jocy

Reviewer: Laelie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2009 01:53 pm Title: Chocolate and Cigarettes

Hey! I already read Hermoine's List and I love your stories....

Is the title of this chapter inspired by the song cigarettes and chocolate milk by Rufus Wainwright? If it isn't you should really listen to it sometime it's great...

(please be forgiving if my English isn't perfect, it's not my mother language♥)

Reviewer: selenesd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2009 07:08 am Title: Matchmaking Slytherins

Slytherin/Gryffindor pairings are awesome!! I like the way you write, it's been a while since I've read a fic with this amount of dialogue :)

I particularly like your explanation for Severus' teeth, I haven't seen that one before, and Draco is just lovely (he is my favorite character and paired with Harry is even better!).

Reviewer: sinbad Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2007 10:39 pm Title: The End of an Era

Very enjoyable story.  I wish you included an epilogue of what happens in their life.

Reviewer: Maddy Riddle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2007 10:42 pm Title: The End of an Era

Aww. It was a lovely story.
I was following it when it was a WIP and I re-read it now to remember all of it before reading the new chapters.
I'd love to know what they did after they left Hogwarts in that way, but I see this is the end and I understand it's a good ending as it stands.

Great story! :D

Reviewer: WIKTT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2007 06:42 pm Title: When shit hits the fan

I'm not sure which chapter it was but I was highly amused with the line "Why?" Two voices asked. Severus looked up to see Salazar leaning against his frame, watching them intently. "

And the dialogue between Godric and Salazar made me laugh to no end.

I'm enjoying this fiction and I hope you don't stop writing.

Couldn't hurt to throw in some more jealous Snape in the near future?
Gonna give you a 10 just 'cause this fiction is just great (:

Reviewer: oscarxena Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2007 08:22 am Title: Setting The Scene

I love this story.

I truly appreciate that you allowed the relationships to evolve in a realistic manner.

PLEASE (beg, beg), write one more chapter showing the dressing-down of Dumbledore. I cannot imagine John Granger accepting Hermione's dismissal (especially with approving of Severus and having him reside in his house).

Thank you for sharing your story.

Reviewer: Analia_the_1st Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2007 08:02 pm Title: Setting The Scene

Please don't tell me that this is all. I think the story really merits a sequel if you haven't already written one.

I was very impressed by your excellent grasp of spelling and grammer. I also think that you did a good job on keeping everyone in character too.

I really liked the realistic sex as well. It's become too commonplace for fanfic sex to be absolutely perfect, with everyone doing everything right, and both characters being able to last for eternity before one of them decides that they've had enough shagging for the night.

The only thing I didn't like was the utterly cliff hanger ending you put on the story. I would really like to know what happens to Hermione and Severus now that Dumbledore and the rest of the school knows about their relationship.

--Analia

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