



[Report This]Date: 03/25/2007 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooooooooohhhhh! I like! keep up the wonderful work! this is definetly a wonderful beginning to what Ibelieve will be a great story! I like the way you managed to make your original character realistic for the magical story. I also like that you don't go to quickly for a story pace (if that makes sence). great job!