Date: 03/26/2023 03:03 am Title: Epilogue
Loved this story. Thank you so very much for writing it
Love Sonia
Date: 03/06/2020 11:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen - The rain is full of ghosts tonight
No, I'm sorry - I still don't like your Snape. And I'm a bit concerned that you keep denying that he raped her. If somebody slips a date-rape-drug to a drunk girl and then has sex with her - was she not raped in your opinion?
Date: 03/01/2013 06:11 pm Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed it :) & you managed to bump Ron off in the process (yay). Thanks!
Date: 03/23/2012 08:39 pm Title: Epilogue
Aw. Your Snape is a total bastard, but I kinda like him for that. Slightly OOC they may have been but it was bloody entertaining, and if I wanted them in character I'd be reading the originals now wouldn't I? I particularly like the shit happens mentality of your characters and the sparsity of angst. Kudos.
Date: 06/14/2010 05:32 am Title: Prologue
seriously love the possesive snape in the epilouge.
Date: 03/07/2010 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen - What ceremony of words can patch the havoc?
OH! This must be Minerva - yeah!! :) Oh... or Mad-Eye which wouldn't be good at all. I do think Snape is on their side, I just think he has a really crappy way of going about "helping". Mad-Eye wouldn't bother listening to anything Snape had to say, where as Minerva just may give him a chance to explain himself.
Date: 03/07/2010 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Ten - Batter my heart, three person'd Snape
My review here is actually in relation to an earlier chapter. I was hoping to find the reasoning in a later chapter but it hasn't come up so now I'm wondering about it. Forgive me for jumping around a bit.
I don't understand why Snape insists that he is not raping Hermione and why she is willing to accept that statement as truth. He most certainly IS raping her, or at least he DID rape her and now she is going along with it willingly (per this current chapter). I don't understand the logic of either of them here and how they rationalize that it somehow wasn't rape for Snape to get a teenager drunk, trick her into taking a potion that would take away inhibitions and then procede to have sex with her. Just because she wasn't screaming in protest doesn't somehow negate that she was raped by him.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2010 04:14 pm Title: Chapter Nine - No Coward Soul is Mine
Hmm... so the Vow can not be broken by Draco's death? I wonder if that's true, but I'm inclined to believe it is. And I don't know what Snape's so mad about. It's not him that will be trapped for all eternity, it's Hermione. If she dies first, she's his peronal ghost, if he dies first, she is still bond to him in some way. This sucks. ~sigh~
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2010 03:44 pm Title: Chapter Eight - The dreadful matyrdom must run its course
Oh, I didn't think about Draco being the bonder to the UV Snape and Hermione had. So, Hermione is free! I know Snpe doesn't find that appealing, but I certainly do and I'm sure Hemrione will much enjoy it too. Although I assume Severus will keep the news from her for as long as possible.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2010 02:29 pm Title: Chapter Four - The Taking of a Toast and Tea
Wh..wh... WHAT!?! A child? whoa....
Snape is wasting no time in initiating Hermione into her new role, I see. Goodness! At this stage I have to lean towards 'bad' Snape, although I'm guessing at least some kind of positive motives will come out in the end. I'm sure it doesn't feel that way to Hermione right now though.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2010 11:42 am Title: Chapter Three - Arrival of the Bee Box
I can't decide if Snape is 'good' or 'bad' here. Like Hermione, I assume the best of him, but his aloofness now has me wondering what his real intent is.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2010 10:10 am Title: Chapter Two - Caina
You painted a horrifying picture of Draco's torture and probably the most henious redition of Voldemort that I have personally read (and I have read many ideas of Voldemort's viciousness).
Although it would be incorrect to say that I enjoy reading such things, I did appreciate the very 'realness' you used to create the protrait of a true monster. Although we all try, very few of us can paint such a truly twisted (and again, 'real') picture of what a megalomaniac would really be if he were allowed free reign like Voldemort has amongst his followers.
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2010 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1 - A Witch Alone
I really enjoy they way you're weaving canon into the story. You have me intrigued as to what Hermione is going to do. I wonder if she will have anyone help her with Snape - maybe Minerva?? Or if she will truly carry the burden all alone.
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 02:34 am Title: Epilogue
"Don't want to hear it," he interrupted, clasping his hands over his ears. "La, la, la, la, can't hear a thing, la, la."
Oh Harry, you silly boy!!!
I am so glad to have a happy ending to it all. A wonderful tale, thank you so much for sharing it!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 02:26 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three - Redemption
No!! Severus can't be dead you cruel author. I know you must have a trick up your sleeve to bring him back! (Please?!?)
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 02:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two - Absolution
His snarky response drifted back to her.
"Rescue Harry bloody Potter. Again."
Oh yay! Go Severus!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 02:04 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One - Judecca
Oh, now I really, really don't trust Ron Weasley! Why doesn't anyone ever listen to me??
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 01:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty - After such knowledge, what forgiveness
Oh oh I don't trust Ron Weasley!!!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 01:46 am Title: Chapter Nineteen - The exaggerated look of captivity
Oh no, it has to be a trick! Snape can't be on their side, he just can't be!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 01:40 am Title: Chapter Eighteen - Lily is dancing on the table
I see a bit more chemistry forming between our happy couple. :)
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 01:30 am Title: Chapter Seventeen - The mask-and-magic-man's regalia
Well, what the heck is up with
Rodolphus? That was just creepy!!
So now Hermione is pregnant and they have to do it even more? Oh poor, poor thing. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 01:20 am Title: Chapter Sixteen - The rain is full of ghosts tonight
I'm not so sure hiding out at Malfoy Manor if a very good idea. And who is the voice, I'm guessing one of the protraits, but who?
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 01:09 am Title: Chapter Fifteen - My friends forsake me like a memory lost
Oh, I'm glad Severus smacked Ron, he deserved that and more!!!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 12:58 am Title: Chapter Fourteen - What ceremony of words can patch the havoc?
Oooh, I wonder who that was?
And the visual of Crooksie flying through the air, claws at the ready was a bit scary!
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2009 12:12 am Title: Chapter Thirteen - My! People come and go so quickly here!
Hmmm... I can't help but detect a bit of chemistry between Hermione and Snape.