Date: 09/03/2010 08:42 pm Title: My Happy Ending
The way you worked the lyrics into the story was great. Poor Severus!
Date: 05/26/2008 06:22 pm Title: Tear Away
Sequel, pleeaase pretty pleeaase!!!!
Oh man, what a story!
I usually don't wish people bad luck but in this case... Harry, I hope Hermione finds out about you and gets her revenge, serves you right!!
Date: 03/15/2008 11:49 am Title: Tear Away
ok...i now know for sure.....I HATE POTTER!!!! but i muz say...i think i understand how he feels...
brilliantly written *claps*
perhaps a sequel will be nice....




[Report This]Date: 03/15/2008 11:43 am Title: Slipped Away
damn u....u made me tear....my heart pretty much broke for him....
very nicely written....hating potter already....
Date: 02/27/2008 03:58 pm Title: Tear Away
ha! wow harry's like so mean and cruel. relishing in other people's misery! i love this series even though it is twisted, but in a good way!
Date: 02/27/2008 03:46 pm Title: Slipped Away
o i get it! it majorly sucks!
Date: 02/27/2008 03:34 pm Title: My Happy Ending
ha! love the twist. it's different, but somehow the same




[Report This]Date: 10/14/2007 07:10 pm Title: Tear Away
This is an interesting hort series. I like it ,although it would do Harry justice if Hermione found out about his manipulations and created her own brand of reprisal.




[Report This]Date: 09/15/2007 07:20 pm Title: Tear Away
Please continue. Potter must be made to pay!
Date: 08/30/2007 09:57 am Title: Tear Away
Dark! But I am waiting for the sequel! Boy is Harry in trouble.




[Report This]Date: 08/27/2007 05:34 pm Title: Slipped Away
I hope you did do a sequal, maybe with a happy ending.




[Report This]Date: 08/27/2007 04:31 pm Title: My Happy Ending
I would love to see a sequal!




[Report This]Date: 03/07/2007 12:02 pm Title: Slipped Away
PLEASE write a sequel. I can't stand to have him left so miserable!




[Report This]Date: 12/23/2006 08:48 am Title: Tear Away
Please do write a sequel! This is excellent but I need a happy ending. Can't go letting the bad guy win, now can we?
It really is excellent : )




[Report This]Date: 12/11/2006 08:36 pm Title: Tear Away
I love this so much. Harry is so dark and twisted and vile, but so believable, too. If Harry ever does go evil, you've captured the path to it magnificently!
One question: You said "Unaware that he still had an audience, he spoke his thoughts aloud. 'Hermione, Hermione, Hermione. You didn't really think you would get to live 'Happily Ever After,' now did you?'"
Does that mean that Hermione was still in the house and heard Harry say that? I certainly hope so, because I really want SS and HG to get back together again.
Please continue it and end it with them getting back together! I love this little series!




[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 07:27 pm Title: Tear Away
Where the heck is Ginny in all of this?




[Report This]Date: 11/21/2006 02:49 am Title: Tear Away
Don't you dare end it there! If nothing else, who was the 'audience'?
I want more, damnit. Get typing.
Author's Response: damn. with encouragement like that how can I refuse?




[Report This]Date: 10/03/2006 07:11 am Title: Slipped Away
PLEASE continue this! And please make it end with Severus and Hermione getting back together, agian! You can even still keep the title of "Unhappily Ever After"...just turn it around so that it's HARRY who lives 'unhappily ever after'! That would be a twist! All this time we're thinking it's SS/HG who don't have a happy ending, but all the while it's HARRY in his failed plot to break the two up!
Anyway, please continue it!!
Author's Response: there's another piece to this set of one shots, and then a longer mutli-chapter fic coming. Stay tuned for more! Thank you for leaving a review!