



[Report This]Date: 05/05/2007 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loved it.
I gave you a 9 out of 10 for a couple of mistakes in grammar and such, but otherwise it was perfect. I absolutely loved the ending of last chapter.
Sam




[Report This]Loved it.
I gave you a 9 out of 10 for a couple of mistakes in grammar and such, but otherwise it was perfect. I absolutely loved the ending of last chapter.
Sam