Date: 11/16/2009 01:30 am Title: June
There are so few stories that can be re-read, but yours is one, and I had a great time re-reading this after all this time! Thank you for such a wonderful story.
Date: 10/10/2009 01:32 am Title: June
This is something I have never scene before.And its brilliant!! But scary!Your an awesome writer who thinks outside the box while thinking inside it.
[Report This]Date: 01/22/2009 07:40 pm Title: June
Man, your story was so...torturing. I mean, I love SS/HG ship, but after reading this story, I was like, your descriptions are amazing and you definitely bring it to life. I felt that this story, unlike most others showed the Lolitaness of SS/HG relationship (during school years) - yeah, I know Hermione's of age and everything, but it's just your descriptions made her into a little girl and Snape - sort of into a perv, an old man who lusted after and loved a schoolgirl. I mean your fist description of the sex scene (and later Tilly's one, which was, of course, much more horrible) made me all uneasy and queezy...it just felt so wrong, however in love Snape thought himself to be. I've never read a SS/HG story set during Hogwarts years that made me so reluctant to continue reading it. But I'll give you this, it IS rather different.
[Report This]Date: 01/22/2009 07:38 pm Title: June
Man, your story was so...torturing. I mean, I love SS/HG ship, but after reading this story, I was like, your descriptions are amazing and you definitely bring it to life. I felt that this story, unlike most others showed the Lolitaness of SS/HG relationship (during school years) - yeah, I know Hermione's of age and everything, but it's just your descriptions made her into a little girl and Snape - sort of into a perv, an old man who lusted after and loved a schoolgirl. I mean your fist description of the sex scene (and later Tilly's one, which was, of course, much more horrible) made me all uneasy and queezy...it just felt so wrong, however in love Snape thought himself to be. I've never read a SS/HG story set during Hogwarts years that made me so reluctant to continue reading it. But I'll give you this, it IS rather different.
Date: 05/03/2008 02:41 pm Title: June
Frustrating and brilliant story. I am now going to rush off and hope that "Forgive us our trespasses" is complete.
Date: 03/29/2007 06:56 am Title: Prologue
I`m waiting for epiloque ...please, please, please..... :-))))
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 06:54 pm Title: June
Beautiful story, though the ending I loved dearly, and at the same time with that twist I wanted to kill you till I realized there was a third part lol... I will hop off to read as much as I can of that now *Giggles*
Great work once again.
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 06:41 pm Title: May
Wow.. Its great that Snape got off.. But now to see what will happen with him and poor Hermoine.. Once again.. Perfect.
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 06:34 pm Title: April
Awww. Poor Snape! :Loved this chapter like all the rest lol.
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 05:11 pm Title: December
My god! You sure know how to make a girl fall in love with a story!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 04:34 pm Title: November
I am completely in love!
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 04:16 pm Title: September
I really love this story so far!!! its simply PERFECT!!!! Thanks for writing it!
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2006 01:00 am Title: June
I loved that you brought Hermione's journal into this--that echo of Tilly was a bit eeirie. Wonderful story--I'm so glad I found it.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2006 12:53 am Title: May
I liked that you didn't pull your punches with Remus making the right arguments about why Snape wasn't doing the right thing, and yet you still tug at us by doing things like reminding us of the Patronus.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2006 12:37 am Title: April
You really make me feel for Snape here--the juxtaposition of how Tilly sees his encounter with Hermione and his own recollections are so powerful.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2006 12:23 am Title: March
I like how you--and your Snape are honest about the complications and possible consequences of their relationship, and I love the way you're making the passages in the diary fit.
[Report This]Date: 10/03/2006 12:06 am Title: February
Interesting development with those Owls--and in the mystery so far.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2006 11:51 pm Title: January
I loved that moment between Snape and Hermione--and I find myself feeling a great deal of sympathy for Tilly in spite of myself.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2006 11:15 pm Title: December
I like how you develop their relationship and how it ties into Tilly's disintegration. You make them establishing a relationship plausible despite the barriers and that's no small feat.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2006 10:07 pm Title: November
...and things get even worse. I like your Tonks quite a bit. Clumsy like a fox... And your Tilly just gets scarier.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2006 09:48 pm Title: October
This is really different from other SS/HG I've read. I like how you're showing Hermione though Tilly's eyes and having Snape read it causing him to reflect on his own relationship with her. And it also serves to move the development of the mystery forward.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2006 01:37 am Title: September
The diary excerpts are really great at showing a warped, really disturbed mind, and I loved seeing Ron defend Snape for once.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2006 01:21 am Title: Prologue
This pulled me right into a mystery and definately makes me want to read more. Great setup