Reviews For Potions Problems
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Reviewer: mkwiant Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2013 08:14 pm Title: Credits

lol!  That's awesome!

Reviewer: breastlady Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2012 07:09 pm Title: Potions Problems

I hate that Skeeter bitch! I hope you have some horrible punishment planned for her.

Reviewer: darklotus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2010 06:45 am Title: Credits

I'll quite happily review your smut my dear -

Yes, it had squick, yes, it had non con, yes,it had naughty naked Severus (never a bad thing) and yes.... I LOVED IT!

For so much smut, you managed to fit in quite a bit of plot, too - and the "deatheater and virgin scene was hot, hot, hot!

 

And, to top it all off, the enchantingly nasty Rita got a double comeuppance! (don't know which would be worse, Filch or Azkaban...)

All in all, a thoroughly good time was had by this reader!

Reviewer: Satai Delenn Signed star [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2008 02:07 am Title: Potions Problems

This story has potential, but you should really consider getting a beta. There were TONS of punctuation errors (such as no commas where there should have been, thereby making sentence structure extremely confusing), and some grammatical and spelling errors. Please consider finding a beta to help you correct these errors.

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