



[Report This]Date: 07/05/2008 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 56
I have been following this story for quite a while on AFF. I really love it. It is one of my favorite Snape/OC stories. Is there any chance for an update? I hope it is not abandoned.




[Report This]Date: 03/09/2008 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 56
i really hope you get to finish this one day, its a great story and you write really well
Date: 03/23/2007 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
This site is great for finding and printing but it really reaks when it comes to folks leaving reviews. I LOVE a good Severus OFC fic. I have been writing one myself, off and on for about three years now. Really need to get back to it. I enjoy your Severus in this tale. He comes with just the right combination of snark and... hmm, less snark. Your female character is spicy and sweet. I grew up in a military family and I am glad to see someone using the US military in a well written story. Are you posted anywhere else that has more of your story? I see you have not updated for several months. I only hope you have not given up on this one. I would like to see it taken to completion. Not to mention, I would really appreciate a good sexy love scene. Huggs,
gotsnape