The Masque :: An Erotic Renaissance

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Reviewer: DTM Signed

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Date: Oct 02, 2008 - 02:43 pm Title: Fixing It

I really liked this story line.

However there are a lot of words that need to be changed. I think you may have used spell check but did not reread the story as there are a lot of things like "he" instead of "the". I'd suggest reading thru it slowly before posting it as those kind of things make it hard to read at times.

But I did like the story throughout and could picture the scenes well with the way you described them. And some good, erotic action as well!

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