Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 17
Ah! Jason only got a kiss! They both seemed like they wanted to continue. I think they're both confused.
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
lol. Jason was beat by Olivia *snicker* that's what he gets! I love how everyone interacts with each other. It's so great!
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 15
ah, poor Michael wanting to kiss Jason and Jason not liking it. Michael should clarify his feelings if he wants some attention. :) good job! very nice dialogue and believable as well.
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 14
I think Michael is a lot more serious and interested in Jason than Jason is with him. It's going to be interetsing how this all plays out. Are they both going to end up liking each other? I have no idea.
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yeah! They're adorable together; especially, Michael and his teasing. :) I love it!
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
*snicker* he was caught naked. lol. Wow. I though Michael would care more about his money, but hey I guess if you have it why not spend it.
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 11
AH! they're either both extremely good actors or Micheal actually likes Jason or is working up to it anyway. I like Olivia. She's a very sweet woman.
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
:) You wouldn't expect sleeping together would be a big deal, but it must be very uncomfortable to share a bed with someone you've just met. :) great job!
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
*snicker* I like Michael even though he's trying to fool his mom. He's clever and Jason is sweet too.
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
lol. Twenty questions and more today. They seem to both be decent people. This could work out for everyone. :)
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
*snicker* I had a feeling something like this would happen, but I wonder how exactly it will turn out. :) great job! you've caught my interest!
Date: Jun 13, 2009 - 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
*snicker* the poor guy. He gambled all his money away and now he's trying to gain it back and was caught on the first try.lol It was probably for the best though. great job. I like it!
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2008 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 39
Great story. I like the fact you didn't make the chapters very long, it pulled me into the next chapter.
Nice twist to the ending, having mum aware of what was going on.
Keep writing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2008 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 39
Wow. That was a great story. You really have a way with words. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. Absolutely loved it. I hope you plan to write more stories, cause I know I would love to read them.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Yes, more are coming. I posted this one to gauge reactions, before I posted more stories. I wrote several, but only one other (in my opinion) is worthy to be posted. It should be up soon. It's called "Confounded".
Date: Jun 12, 2008 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Better off away from parents who'll disown him for something so simple.
Is his luck on the way up perhaps ?