Date: 05/05/2010 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Information and Relocation
EXCELLENT!!!!
I look forward to future chapters...
Date: 04/25/2008 12:26 am Title: Chapter 8 - Information and Relocation
Not bad! started off alittle stilted but got better. Very nice can't wait to see more.
Date: 10/04/2006 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A sugar coated order
Mage? Magic? Family Tree?
Author's Response: *Groans* Good gods, but this story has to be the worst shite i ever started to write lol...I cant believe it still gets read, it needs a major re-write as well as being completed..if i could fit it in around the kids and everything else i would, but what little time i do get i spend writing 'Obsession' and looking after bubs lol
Date: 10/04/2006 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 3 - A Sinister Plot is hatched
*patients. Yeah I'm annoying. Correcting your story as I go along. Interesting so far.
Date: 10/04/2006 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Rocky Start
Repeat chapter?
Date: 10/04/2006 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1 *Belle of the Ball*
Put out by it. :p
Interesting start for such a short chapter!