Date: 12/26/2006 03:02 am Title: Snow White Queen
This was good, but it needs a bit of cleaning up. May I recommend a beta? I'm available if you like. Feel free to contact me through my author page.
Date: 12/21/2006 07:10 pm Title: Snow White Queen
Ohhh i like that.. That is real twist. Not many people like snape like this but I do..Ohhhh damn good