Date: 03/18/2015 03:00 pm Title: The First Morning After
That was so good, I couldnt put it down. You have some serious talent, looking forward to a sequel?
Date: 12/16/2010 01:52 pm Title: An Offer from "The Bastard Below"
I've only recently discovered the wonderful world of fanfiction and thanks to writers such as yourself, am now totally hooked! I've loved every single story I've read that you've written, and this one so far has not disappointed me. There is however one tiny little thing that I'm finding grating: your use of the word loo instead of bathroom. A loo is a (usually separate) room where the toilet resides. So that if someone says they're going to the loo it means they need to use the toilet.
Date: 12/06/2010 06:16 am Title: The First Morning After
love this story.
Date: 06/16/2010 02:45 pm Title: An Offer from "The Bastard Below"
"Cock...a-doodle-do."
"You really should have been in Slytherin," he observed.
"I don't know about that," Hermione responded, "but I know one thing. I certainly like Slytherin in me."
best quotes ever! So original! Excellent story, can't wait for a sequel.
Date: 08/02/2009 01:44 pm Title: Seeing the Potential
this story is awesome; I love it.
Date: 10/12/2008 03:32 pm Title: The First Morning After
Very good story. I enjoy all of your stories. Especially the one where their roles are reversed. Hermione as the potion master and Severus as the student. That was sweet.
Date: 10/12/2008 05:17 am Title: Rita Skeeter...an Update
SAAAAAAWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTT REVENGE! Ya gotta love it.
Date: 10/12/2008 04:27 am Title: BREAKING NEWS!
OH HELL YEAH!!! I LOVE IT! LMAO
Date: 07/08/2008 09:19 am Title: The First Morning After
like the detail about the professor wanting to protect his orifice... ;-)
Date: 07/08/2008 08:13 am Title: A Wake Up Call...Potions Master Style
I will never be satisfied with a man. Knowing there is a Severus in the fantacy like THAT I will never be able to find one in the "real" world.... sob.
Date: 07/07/2008 03:30 pm Title: The Conspiracy
now I love all the house elfes.
Date: 07/07/2008 03:19 pm Title: Morning Has Broken
still love Eli.
Date: 07/07/2008 02:41 pm Title: Albus Makes an Offer
hi hi hi hi. Poor cherubs, NOT!
Date: 07/07/2008 02:01 pm Title: Setting Up the Labs
ha ha ha ah a hah ah hahahah ooh, dear good. I am SOO not gonna survive the rest. In- outies,. hi hi hi hi
Date: 07/07/2008 01:33 pm Title: A Rather Sexy Supper
love Eli. love you.
Date: 07/07/2008 12:56 pm Title: Moving Day
I love Eli. stating a fact here.
Date: 07/07/2008 12:05 pm Title: Hermione Faces Off with the Ministry
good! GOODS! ha ha ha ha! cant... stop... laughing... hi hi hi. the rita curse... brilliant!! ha ha ha ha...!! I don't think I'm gonna survive reading ther rest of the story... :-)
Date: 07/07/2008 11:09 am Title: Hermione Needs to Unwind
goods!!! I must say, I love, simply love! the house elf. Goods! You are AMAZING. If you weren't a female and I in Denmark... GOODS! ANd Snapes naked swimming... Said it in an other review, but I love you and you have a lucky husband. geeze, your grown children must be soo happy to have you as a mom. You think like me, the thoughts I have aout a chapter, you answer in the A/N: wow.
Date: 06/02/2008 11:46 am Title: Albus Makes an Offer
Wonderful chapter! :)
I was just wondering, shouldn't Hermoine've asked those Herbology Major's to take an Wizards Oath or something? Just to be sure? :)
Other than that, I love it! xD
Chuu,,
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure Neville took care of that when he took them on. Glad you are enjoying the story. ***
Date: 04/06/2008 03:48 am Title: The First Morning After
Wonderful as always. I personally loved how you drew it out it was so delicous, and had me actually squealing when they would get close! lol Anticipation For The Win. Thank you for another sleepless night. *laughs*
Date: 11/25/2007 04:58 am Title: The First Morning After
I loved this story. I was hoping they would marry -- maybe for the sequel. Great writing!
Date: 08/19/2007 09:28 pm Title: The First Morning After
So I break ranks again. *sigh*
Superbly written. Humorous, dramatic, eloquently descriptive, and the plot...Wow. I love Bossy-Greedy!Hermione and Sexy-Devious!Severus. I don't need to actually SAY that the sex was hot do I? 5 alarm fire hot. Mind-blowing hot. Hot, hot, hot. Oh, and did I say...hot?
Heh. Lovely, lovely writing. Thanks again for sharing it with us.
Date: 08/19/2007 01:16 pm Title: Severus Figures Out a Way
To my shame, I never review (greedy, time-constrained bitch that I am) but I'm delurking because I just HAVE to comment. First, I ADORE your writing. All of your fics that I've read have been tremendous. Great, smooth style. Original, thought-provoking plots. DAMN hot smut! I mean seriously, time for a cold-shower or jump my SO HOT! Heh.
But in this chapter...OMG! Evil incarnate. I love how you write Sev's thought processes here at the end. How just telling the truth is what will get her fired... I especially loved the line
"But these weren't reasonable, thinking people. This was the Ministry." CLASSIC!
You are truly my favorite HG/SS writer. I love how you capture/portray their characters, how you develop them throughout the story. And your OC's. They are priceless. I love how you use them again and again. I feel like I know them and enjoy how they blend seemingly effortlessly into the fic. OK. So now that I've babbled on incessantly, I will go back to lurking. Thank you for sharing your work.