Penname: missvelachik [Contact] Real name: Alecia
Member Since: 02/03/2008
Membership status: Member
Bio:

i am alecia. i find myself reading because im infatuated with what others have to say and how their imaginations unfold. writing is not for me. *peace and love!*

Beta-reader: Yes
Gender: female
Location: delaware ohio
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Reviews by missvelachik
Summary: Severus Snape is many things. A teacher, a spy, a traitor, an ally. Some hate him, some love him, but no one knows where his loyalties lie. He is indubitably a man of many talents and a master of deception. My stories all center around Severus Snape, this is an effort to create a believable back story to a character who has become my favourite character in the Potterverse. The stories are sorted chronologically.
Parent Series: None
Categories: The Compendium
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Eileen Prince, James Potter, Lily Evans-Potter, Lucius Malfoy, Peter Pettigrew, Remus John Lupin, Severus Snape, Sirius Black
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: HBP Spoilers
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Drama, Friendship, General
Stories: 6
Open: Closed [Report This]
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/03/2008 Title: Master of Deception

Are you kidding me? And you put in author's note that no one would review or read this? It's under top 10 favs and longest series and I've noticed that you put yourself as a favorite story. LOL!!

Author's Response: You seem to be a bit confused here, or maybe just want to troll. In a total of seven series, it's not really a great surprise to find this under the top ten. Series, apparently, aren't widely used, and thus, this being the longest doesn't say much either. So much to the series. Now to the story. I can't recall saying in the author's notes that the story isn't reviewed widely. I may have responded to a reviewer, since there have been several asking why this isn't reviewed more, but these are responses, not the authors' notes. It's not a popular story, that's why. What I said in the authors' notes is that this will be finished, whether someone reads it or not. And I certainly haven't put myself up as favourite author.

Summary: Harry Potter uses a Time-Turner to try and save the lives of Severus Snape and Hermione Granger. Faerie tale type romance for SS and HG. HP/NT GW/RL *This story is complete but, it is undergoing a re-write... then it is being beta read and re-posted!*
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: General
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99751 Read Count: 2991
[Report This] Published: 08/11/2006 Updated: 01/08/2008
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Disclaimer for The Incident In The Great Hall

I haven't exactly proceeded, but can you do me a huge favor and please please pleas please tell me if you're going to be accurately DESCRIPTIVELY explaining each and every minor detail, if you know what I mean? I suppose that's what the internet's for. Ha! It just gives me an unpleasant vivid picture inside my head.

Slave Dancer by neesybelle Rated: Mature [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Please Read & Review!!! Voldemort has won the war, and takes Hermione as a slave. Severus becomes her teacher, Keeper and friend.
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: None
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Friendship, General
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8139 Read Count: 314
[Report This] Published: 08/13/2006 Updated: 08/13/2006
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/05/2008 Title: Chapter 2: One

Omg I never thought that Voldemort would be treating any such slaves luxuriously.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/05/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Three

Lol that's good, dancing is like preferably so much better than authors explaining in detail about sex. This is getting weirder and like majorly more weird by the chapter.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/05/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Four

Did you not complete this fic because no one ever reviewed?

Sleepless Nights by CyanaWhite Rated: Explicit starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Hermione is awakened in the middle of the night by a mysterious shadow in her room. Before she has time to react she finds herself in a situation she had never even dreamed of! Many strange and seemingly inexplicable events ensue. Now Edited
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: Ambigious Consent
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Drama, General, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11980 Read Count: 1321
[Report This] Published: 08/13/2006 Updated: 12/20/2006
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/27/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Hermione's Mistake

love it!!!

Summary: This is set just after Severus has fled from Hogwarts at the end of HBP.
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: General
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 698 Read Count: 173
[Report This] Published: 08/14/2006 Updated: 08/14/2006
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/04/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Regret On The Road To Redemption

You know, there's actually truth to that. Lol.

A Mermaid's Choice by Stormi Rated: Explicit starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Chapters 1&2 and 3&4 have been Beta read and combined. Chapter 4 is new. WIKTT Mermaid Forever Challenge ... Hermione must choose between the Mermaid world and Hogwarts. This is NOT COMPLETE.
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4306 Read Count: 738
[Report This] Published: 08/16/2006 Updated: 08/16/2006
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/03/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Four

I really enjoyed reading this fic, it's a different perspective that I am used too and I'm finally learning to read something that is fairly new. Lol. I know you won't confirm this, lol, but is Hermione's schedule going to be an interfering conflict? I am almost sure about that, but I suppose it could be a red herring, you know.

My Happy Ending by Shanastay Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Things seldom turn out the way you hope or expect. All is not well in the House of Snape. One-shot songfic inspired by Avril Lavigne's "My Happy Ending."
My Happy Ending has been nominated for Best Infidelity & Break-up at The Sorting Hat: Harry Potter Thematic Fanfiction Awards. (See all the nominees here.)
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: HBP Spoilers, Violence
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Songfic
Series: Unhappily Ever After - Where it Began
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2329 Read Count: 516
[Report This] Published: 09/04/2006 Updated: 09/10/2006
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: My Happy Ending

ha! love the twist. it's different, but somehow the same

Slipped Away by Shanastay Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: This is a companion piece to "My Happy Ending" done at your request! Severus drives away the woman he loves. Read "My Happy Ending" before this.
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Original Female Character, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: HBP Spoilers, Violence
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Songfic
Series: Unhappily Ever After - Where it Began
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2756 Read Count: 354
[Report This] Published: 09/10/2006 Updated: 09/11/2006
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Slipped Away

o i get it! it majorly sucks!

Perfection by SilburyGrl Rated: Explicit starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: In her quest for perfection, Hermione finds herself slipping down a path she didn't mean to walk. Snape would rather not be dragged in, but does so just the same. Draco picks sides and Ginny learns what she wants, although the price may be sanity.
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Dr. Granger (mother), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Drama, General
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 159918 Read Count: 5520
[Report This] Published: 10/05/2006 Updated: 05/12/2007
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Perfection - Prologue

i like this story so far, but the way it was written is interesting, but not in a bad way.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/27/2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - Melting

i like the way this story is turning out

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/27/2008 Title: Chapter 31: 25. Memento Mori - Part Two

i still love the story!

A Tale of Two Men by ancientgirl Rated: Restricted starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary: *Not HBP Compliant* Lucius Malfoy has been a Death Eater most of his adult life. A near tragic event involving his son causes him to rethink his beliefs, and he changes his status with the Order, including his friendship with a certain Potions master and a Weasley female. Rated R for later chapters.
Categories: The Compendium
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76622 Read Count: 14050
[Report This] Published: 10/24/2006 Updated: 11/14/2006
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/04/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really enjoy this story so far, and it seems as though people are far happier, smiling more, but yet there's emotional loss. And how could Harry be gay? That's just the one little thing that bugs me.

Author's Response: Why can't Harry be gay? I could have done the norm and paired him with a female character, but I wanted to give his and Draco's character a bit of something different.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/04/2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I thought it would be Harry and Draco making out. When I read your warning I was all like, o wow, do I really wanna read this?

Author's Response: I didn't want to make things too graphic, but I did want to warn people just in case. I hope that doesn't turn you off, but I wanted to do something a little different in this story, and write some characters in here that were really not written much about in the actual books.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/04/2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I did skip that part as you advised and Snape was definitely inventive.

Author's Response: That's no problem. I tried to make it so if anyone wanted to skip that it wouldn't take away from the rest of the story.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/04/2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I didn't wanna write any more reviews for sake of getting on people's nerves. Lol. I really did love this story, ha and it had a happy ending, despite losses.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to do something a bit different with the Death Eaters, and I was pretty happy with the way it all came out. Thanks for taking the time to read this.

Tear Away by Shanastay Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Companion fic to "My Happy Ending" and "Slipped Away" done by your request! Third part of the "Unhappily Ever After" Series detailing Harry's POV. Read "My Happy Ending" and "Slipped Away" first.
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Dobby, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: HBP Spoilers, Violence
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Songfic
Series: Unhappily Ever After - Where it Began
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2529 Read Count: 326
[Report This] Published: 11/20/2006 Updated: 11/20/2006
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/27/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Tear Away

ha! wow harry's like so mean and cruel. relishing in other people's misery! i love this series even though it is twisted, but in a good way!

Summary: While hunting for Horcruxes with her friends, Hermione learns surprising facts about Snape's past. Will that change the way she thinks about him? AU after HBP. May contain DH spoilers. **Winner** Order of Merlin, Third Class, OWL Awards 2007 for Action/Adventure.
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: HBP Spoilers
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Romance
Series: Master of Deception
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210531 Read Count: 13406
[Report This] Published: 02/14/2007 Updated: 10/18/2013
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 04/06/2008 Title: Chapter 14: Tactical Dispositions

that stinks for hermione

Author's Response: It does, doesn't it? Let's hope she gets over it.

Women on Top by Maddy Riddle Rated: Mature starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Past Featured StoryAfter the war, the Wizarding world needs to be rebuilt and wizards need to stand together again. The future demands a new order, and the women are up to that task. --- SS/HG/LM
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Bellatrix Black-Lestrange, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Humor
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17905 Read Count: 3849
[Report This] Published: 04/02/2007 Updated: 07/12/2007
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/05/2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Enemies of My Enemy Are My Allies

Hermione and Bellatrix Lestrange, getting along even though they had too? Clever! ha!

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/05/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue or We're Not In Kansas Anymore, Harry

I really did like this story and the part about Percy was my highlight of humor, for this fic shows he was truly a prat.

Summary: When the Weasley twins decide Hogwarts could use a little love in times of war, Hermione Granger and Severus Snape get caught in the crossfire. As Severus Snape is pushed to fulfill his unbreakable vow, the two of them must work together to help the Order and Harry prepare for the final battle.
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202344 Read Count: 102514
[Report This] Published: 04/28/2007 Updated: 07/25/2007
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/06/2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Settling in at the Dursleys

What exactly is this potion and o by the way I loved her revendge, but I forgot to note it before and this is actually interesting.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/06/2008 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33:Adulthood Acknowledged

O wow you did get a lot of reviews in the long run, but I really do like this fic.

Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/06/2008 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

Little story? Ha!

Summary: Past Featured StoryShe had changed. Long gone was the beloved know-it-all bookworm. T'was nothing more than a memory of what she once was. Her life consumed by darkness, yet ironically she fought for the light. Severus was her saviour, and she was his salvation. HG/SS, disregard HBP and DH
Categories: The Little Green Book
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Severus Snape
WIKtT Challenge: None
Content Notes: Torture, Violence
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23123 Read Count: 5468
[Report This] Published: 06/26/2007 Updated: 11/17/2008
Reviewer: missvelachik Signed
Date: 02/04/2008 Title: Chapter 2: The Manor

That is just so horrible to be tortured like that, changing one's personality greatly.

Author's Response: hmm agreed....but never fear! hermione's a girl made of stronger stuff...you'll see, those little buggers are gonna be sorry!! hahaha

Author's Response: hmm agreed....but never fear! hermione's a girl made of stronger stuff...you'll see, those little buggers are gonna be sorry!! hahaha

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